Well that is one way to go about it.

Wow! Well it seems like a good deal for Harry!

Wonderful! Why doesn't Hedwig recognize Harry?

About time you idiots realized something was wrong at that house!!

Excellent!! Superb beginning!

OMG this is absolutely fantastic! can't wait till harry gets back to hogwarts! will he be resorted? will dumbles and voldie find out that harry is the dark lord? can't wait!

Why did you cut it off in the middle of the sentence?!?!?!?!?! I want to know what's going to happen next! Will Remus give Harry some of his blood too? I think that would be so cool! And will he be an animagus? PLEASE hurry and finish!! Looking forward to the next chapter!

This chapter was awesome!! So cool!!

OMG! I can't wait for the next update...if you are still updating that is...it's so sad when people abandon good stories...please update soon?!-M.P.O.

oh I love it!
update soon, I'll be waiting!

AWSOME!

Cool!

LOVE IT! amazing plot, love the story! i like how harry is dark, but not evil! also i liked how you had him related to Grindelwald, you don't see that very often! great work so far can't wait until you update!

I don't think I'm going to read any more. There are too many character flaws and ellipses for my liking. Can I please just point out that if someone with Harry's accent had told me they were from the states I'd have laughed myself stupid? He's a mockney. He sounds nothing like an American.

Whilst I'm sure your style has evolved and improved in later chapters, I think it would be best if you edit the earlier ones and iron out the mistakes. It makes the whole story seem more appealing.

Harsh, but true.

hey this storyis great! i rally hope u continue it! pwease! i love. u should make him eviller and colder tho lol good job please update ur driving me insane ! lol look forward 2 it