UGH your so mean to stop there, you should like say it in your summary that its discontinued geez RIGHT on the brink of the story and you stop =( but i loved it anyways

omg...I LOVED THIS STORY! *crys* Well..it was great even if you don't finish it...

just started it.
good so far
'cept the names
They take the focus away from the story. i usually when i read and i see a name the first thing i think of pronunciation wise will stick and these names were little to wild for the story. next time some more ordinary names, though its your choice :D

i know its late because you already finished the story...but i bet she finds kevin dead...well..im off to read the rest of story and find our if what i said is what really happened...good story by-the-way

this is so0o good!

AH! I AM GOING TO NON LITTERALLY KILL YOUU!AH. this story was so good! man this sucks.you suck. gah. i need a drink. son of a nutcracker.

- El Jennifer

i keep tripping over the names lol which takes away from the story a little bit but um otherwise im so excited to read the rest! :]

I just don't understand why you put your story as "complete" when it's not... or at last you could've added an "abandoned" to the summary... anyways, your story was really good, it kind of got weird at the last chapters, but it's shame it'll stay unfinished...

I'm sorry, but I really cant read past here. You don't have any sense of punctuation or grammar, and the names you chose are very confusing.

I mean, Nula? And the pronunciations you have after them are distracting. For some constructive critism, I suggest changing the names and getting a beta.

You have a really good idea for a plot, but the actual storyline is a bit disoriented.

I do not know if you are interested in constructive critiscism, but since you did not specify and seem to enjoy your reviews I decided that I will give it. I believe that you need to focus more on how the charactors would truly react, and I also think that the story needs more depth and background, I am sorry if I have upset you, maybe this will be of some consolation. I have been reading Harry Potter Fan Fiction since the series came out, Ihave read countless Fan Fictions, and also written a few, and I believe that you have captured Sirius' charactor extraordinarily well.
~Rosaline

Seems okay, i guess, a bit too OC for me, but i've got a felling that it's going to get a lot better.

omg
i spent the past 3 days of my winter break reading this story!
and now on this chapter u stop
HOW COULD U!
PURE EVIL TO THE READER!
calm...calm...calm...
okok im calm
how could u!
are u sure u are totally sorry?
o well, good bye evil

that was good

aw u cant do that! it was getting so good... maybe u could change some chapters and erase other and make it a simple story... u have many things going on... like the thing w/ aunt gracie should be a coplete different story.. u know, split it up into seccions... like why the hell did u do that part about her friend committing suicide... completally pointless... get whti mean... its a good story just too darn long... i wanna read the end! i really do, ur good at writting this kinds of stories...

its SABANAS not hojas... hoja means sheet of paper.. or leaf.. sabanas is sheets as in bed sheets