   RandomQueen 2007-07-20 . chapter 4weird but funny |
 43InuAsha 2005-12-04 . chapter 4!? OK, WHAT THE-? hehe. FUNNY!! |
 Superchipmunk 2005-09-19 . chapter 4Eep! Arwen got what? This is just not right! |
| Superchipmunk 2005-09-19 . chapter 3 Yah for Arwen! She is in character a little better! |
| Superchipmunk 2005-09-19 . chapter 2 It was strange! And that bit about Arwen was totally out of character. Oh well... MUST READ ON! |
| Superchipmunk 2005-09-19 . chapter 1 Um... that was interesting... very interesting. It's Istanbul (Not Constantinople)! *does a little dance* I will stop while I'm ahead! It was "interesting" though. |
 MattsyKun-TEFA 2005-05-26 . chapter 2WHO! GO MARINERS! IM FROM WASHINGTON, SO its my faveorite team! WHOOHOO! |
 Invader-Nehima 2005-04-20 . chapter 4... |
| Sour Schuyler 2005-04-19 . chapter 4 Lol! This chapter was more random, and I liked it better. ^-~ |
| Sour Schuyler 2005-04-19 . chapter 3 Um... did this have a plot? *sweat drops* And the characters, for people who haven't read your other fics, weren't introduced very well... Inserting the song was kind of random... Other than that, it was okay. |
| Sour Schuyler 2005-04-19 . chapter 2 I can see him now... "...Kagome?" "Yeah!" "What are police?" Lol! |
| Sour Schuyler 2005-04-19 . chapter 1 I thought that the intro was way too short... but if the next few chapters are longer, this will be a lot better! ^_^ I'll just have to see! |
| TITCHY 2004-11-12 . chapter 4 WOW YOU ACTUALLY FINISHED A STORY! |
| TITCHY! 2004-11-12 . chapter 1 HAHAHAHAHA! |
 VampiressAmanda 2004-10-12 . chapter 4I liked this it is ok so far |
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