All three chapters were funny. ^_^

LMAO The last Mary Sue is MY marysue. (well, er, i wrote a story about a character just like her, so i guess she technically isnt mine. but o friggin well i claim her!) i kept reading it and i was stroking my chin and going, "Ah, that seem a wee familiar." hehe oops! my story.

lol what a great story, you've got it down perfectly.

toodles

!nym!

Hot Damn that was funny!

lol, i also find pine trees to be helpful when looking for the Carribean!

:)

!Nym!

this was such a funny story.. i wish that it wasn't ending though!
BURN THE MARY SUES!
please write more?

hi! cute story! I really like it. Too bad its over. Hehe. I was laughing, like, the whole time. ^_^
Ta!
~TheSiriusSparrow~

very amusing! I am an anti-marysue type person, and this was just great to read.

that was so so so funny!
good on ya, that was great...
heheheheh
i am still laughing my head off

This is excellent! Very funny, very shrewdly observed. Your other stories are very good, but I think humour is where your real gift lies. Great stuff!
S.

Very funny parody. I haven't read any Mary Sues under POTC, but I have had the misfortune of reading other mary sues, and I think you parody them perfectly. 10/10

*snicker* that was great!! Sorry, but its way better than mine. *giggles* HI-larious!!