the story so far is absolutely amazing. you've got all the characters very well. especially nadeshiko, always happy and lighthearted. i guess her friend is quite curious about her...
i really can't wait to read your next chapter. but, for now, since i can't haave enough of your writing, i'll go read your other stories as well!

oh well that was unexpected. but in a very good way..

i just had to laugh at yukito's words at the end. he's always so clueless. awesome chapter.

i completely love this chapter. even though it was a little slow after the talk with kero. this chapter is full of emotions. so far, i think it's my favorite one.

hmm. keroberos knows his 'bro' well. awesome chapter.

that was a nice yue/nadeshiko moment.
at the end, does it mean that yue is aware of all of yukito's thoughts and daydreams?

the image of kero and especially yue in pink is just so hilarious! nice chapter.

this is a great beginning. i'm already hooked!

I love how you've finally brought Clow as face to face as possible with Nadeshiko here and you've also reminded me that for all her involvement in what's happening she's still pretty ignorant of what's passed. I wonder how she would feel if she knew the person whom she goes home to every night is one half of her friends ex-lover.

Other than that. E, thank you for always making it worth the wait in between chapters! There's always been sort of languid sensuality to your writing that's always been very apparent which is why, I'm guessing, now that you've actually included something a little more blatantly sexual with Yue somewhat fantasizing about Naddie it comes off as very naughty indeed. Wondering about the sweat on her body, her breath stirring a few strands of his hair, I'm in constant awe of your ability to be able to accomplish in a few well placed sentences what others could only come close to grasping in a few pages.

There are so many other things I want to compliment you on but I feel like I'm starting to babel. Just know that this has really been a pleasure to read and I honestly can not wait until your next update.

A small question though - is Nadeshiko's existence reliant purely on Sakura? Yue, Kero and the cards were able to continue surviving on for a certain period of time after Clow's death but in your mythos would Naddie be doing the same? Yue is a walking example of why being able to live forever in one form or another might not be such a good idea, I wonder how she'd feel about having to one day face the same fate?

This is very good. It will be interesting to see how you resolve the various conflicts.

oh wow that was awesome. Keep it up I really like this.
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I keep rereading this chapter and everytime I do I can't help but fall into a deeper, an deeper infatuation with your writing. I'm very much in love with how you've played withthe symbolism of the rain here - it almost didn't hit me the first time until the line about it getting in the house and Nade has to go and close the windows herself.

This really is a wonderful work of fiction - my only complaint now being that I think Y/N has become my new OTP. ;_; lol I do hope that you update soon, I'll be looking forword to yout update when you do.

oh. My. God. This story is perfection personified, I'm not kidding. This Yue, especially in the first half of tbe story, is EXACTLY the Yue I wish I could capture in my writings! And I'm in awe at some of the details you put into your story. There are certain thoughts I like to include in my own, such as Yue not fitting in in modern times, his home having been demolished, that I NEVER find in other fics! And then there I wasm 3/4 the way done, when i realized who it was writing- YOU! You, the one who wrote teh Clow Stories! (i'm the random girl on livejournal who asked for the link to it) Well, then it all made sense! Youwrite Yue fiction better than anyone, avoiding all the cliches and bringing up the points I wish more people would realize! You're totally my author role model!

Lottsa love,
LLC

lovely story! and i thougjt you said there won't be a YueXNadeshiko romance

that was cute. i can't wait to read the next chapter.