There's something about these first few chapters that are just so fun to read.
Great job!

Well. I am very pleased to let you know that your story made me feel complete on the Kotor story as a whole. =]

I enjoyed it very much and I'll be reading things that you have written in the future most likely. =D

wow
definitely a great start to the story.
(: now just to read the other 200 odd chapters!

loved KOTOR I.

man, I just read the entire story again, and I love it even more this time because the first time I read it a few years ago there were parts of it I didn't really get, but now I read it again and I get it a lot more. this story is awesome, I wish the game could have had such amazing character depth and intrigue but what can you do. you have incredible talent with the written word, have you done anything else? fanfiction? original work? I want to read it!

I can't believe I just read from beginning to end in one sitting yet it feels like no time passed at all. Your story is awesome in both the juicy KOTOR story goodness and your obvious talents as a writer! So how about tackling post-KOTOR II now? :)

I truly enjoyed Bastila and Canderous in this chapter. Their interaction was, well, not only quite hot, but also very telling of them as persons. Well-written intimacy there.

After finally having played KotOR I through completely, I picked this story up again, and find myself even more fascinated. The issue of Revan -- the constructed identity and being who you are -- has been occupying my mind these past days, and you nail them down with great accuracy.

I've just clicked on this, and after reading so far, I'm hooked, and especially fascinated with Bastila and how you're tackling her, which is something I've wondered about: can you ever recover from such intense darkness?
Anyway, I'll continue reading now. Great fic, this is.

I almost forgot... GET CRACK-A-LACKIN' ON YOUR KOTOR II STORY!!

:)

wow. wow. holy shizzle wow. I can't even put into words how much I enjoyed this. Maybe I can... wow.

And not telling us where the bonus chapters are? Oh author, you are a cruel mistress.

This story is love.

*thows roses at athenaprime*

I LOVE YOUR STORY! i read it a few years ago and i never saved the link and of course i forgot the title and author, so i've been looking for it all this time and i finally found it! i'm so happy :D. anyways i really love the parts with bastilla and canderous. now if you'll excuse me while i go cry tears of joy.

I love this story.

I read this story a while back and don't remember if I commented or not, but allow me to say that it remains my favorite post-KotOR fic, and the best thing to do when playing through the game doesn't satisfy my KotOR itch enough. I love all your characterizations, but I especially love your Canderous and Bastila. Excellent job all around.

I never realized how long this thing was until I re-read it. It took me eight freaking days to get to this point. Getting to the point, you are a god. A god as in divine, holy, not of this world.