 NaluWahine 2005-01-23 . chapter 1Nice! I hope you write more on this theme. Yours is the first stuff I've read that has captured the heat the two actors radiate in the same understated way it's delivered by them. Love it! |
 Seraphina Pyra 2004-08-14 . chapter 1Very good |
 elfin2 2004-03-28 . chapter 1I love this one. Lovely extension of the series characters, logical progression of the plot-line. I'm just sorry it's a one-shot and we don't get to see who wins the election. |
 PadawanMage 2003-12-27 . chapter 1Nice mini-fic! I ike how address things as they might happen a year later (food, clothes, etc.)
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Yeah, I also laughed hard when Adama asked if Laura was expecting. Though, I'm surprised he didn't mistakenly think it might be Lee's since he is spending a lot of time with her! ;-)
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Hope you continue with this! |
 recollect me darling 2003-12-24 . chapter 1A nice, fine touch with words, beautiful pacing, crisp grammar. Fantastic characterization and a good, sympathetic forecast of the future. Please keep writing! I've been waiting for a BSG miniseries fanfic author of a high caliber, and here you are! |
 CrysWimmer 2003-12-24 . chapter 1Very enjoyable story... I absolutely love what you've done with the characters. You also have a unique grasp on both the political and practical difficulties that they'd be facing, and that comes through both clearly and with sensitivity. I'd love to read more from you.
One nitpick - Adama's first name, I believe, is William. Husker is his callsign, like Apollo is Lee's. Calling him Husker would still be significant, but it's not an exchange of first names - exactly . |
 Admiral 2003-12-23 . chapter 1Fantastic! A great mini-based fic! |