That genuinely made me laugh. Nice work!

This fanfic made me laugh countless times, please write more parappa fanfiction! There's not enough on this site. _'

You know what would be nice. If you added Hal the Koopa and Jeff the Goomba from that Newgrounds Videos, "BOWSER'S KINGDOM" That's would be money in the god dang bag. (I ain't sayin' it to be mean alright?) Well, You get the stinking idea.

I got a few good laughs out of this one. I didn't reconize a few of the references at first, but the end result of having the gas station restroom out of order I thought was hilarious.

With such a small category to browse through for this fic - I sure did pick the right one. :)

I recently got Parappa The Rapper myself, and completed it in two days - so I thought I'd browse for fan fictions. :D

I loved this - level 5 is by far, my favourite level - so I really enjoyed this. :)

A great mixture of humour, fast-paced action, great characterisations and descriptions.

I especially liked the little joke about the colour-blindness - made me giggle a little. :D

Good luck in the future too! :)

Favourited, this story is. :)

- Dixie A. Stonehall. x x x

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I thought it was very good. lol CheapCheap's seafood cake didn't go very well it seems.

Wow, and all he wanted to do was go to the bathroom.

At the end when you said that lady became a pop star deva, I thought of Terriyaki Yoko from Um Jammer Lammy. She's on Stage 6 when Lammy's at the place with the skulls in the background. I don't know if you know who I'm talking about, but that's who I thought of. It's just funny when I think SHE used to work in the black market. xD

Great job. I really enjoyed it. But why did Smith bug Parappa and call him Mr. Anderson? That part could have used a bit more description.

Well, I can honestly say that out of the thirteen Parappa fics on this site, this has got to be one of the best.

That was pretty good. I really like stories like this, actually I like just about anything like this (t.v. shows, comics, books etc.) You know where someone has to go to the bathroom but a bunch of stuff is preventing them from doing so. It's happened twice in my favorite anime. Anyways great story, very well written. I like the references you made to TMNT and Monty Python and the Holy Grail, my God I love that movie

THIS IS HILARIOUS!

O.O

I didn't even know Parappa fanfiction existed! You rock. This is great.

This is one of the best stories ever. PARAPPA! I loved the TMNT, Agent Smith, and Monty Python bits. Sunny needing to go at the end was genius.

"Some onion, moose, frog, and chicken came by not too long ago and they really stank this place up!" - BEST. LINE. EVER.

Ha ha! This is one of the funniest fics I've ever read! Keep it up!

Dude, that has to be one of the more humorous fanfics I've read (Even though I don't read fanfics as often as I should ; )
Honestly, you should try to make more. This was gold. Pure and utter gold.

Funny! Do more extended-virsions of the Parappa/Lammy games please!

RANDOM AND COMPLETELY INSANE! I like Monty Python references, and Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle stuff, and this was funny, and... Parappa could be sorta colorblind, I guess, but recent studies show that dogs can see some colors, like green and red and not much else...