This was great. I'd like to see the story behind these events (I might have missed it when looking through your work). Well written, and very touching.

Aw, nice story. I'd laugh if you wrote a sequel and Syd really was alive.

that was soo sad... i'm about to cry! it's really good.

EXCELLENT!

Wow...wow wow, I mean, all I can say is "wow." That was an excellent story. I beg of you to write more. This story just totally rocks! Please update!!
-Kat

This story is sad...but in a good way. I like it. It's very well written.

that was so sad!
but, as always, really really good!! great job!

Wow, this was really good, and SO sad. But very good, you wrote it wonderfully.

*dies*
(both because of the story, and because I just ran out of coffee. must get more. have another story to read I see, and I'll need it)
DUDE.
are you crazy?!?!?!
stopping here?!?!?!
I want to see a 1/? or a 1/many or a TBC!
DUDE.
(I'm having fun with this review. it's different than most I leave. lol.)
I'm at a loss. again. (yet I don't shut up. hmm.) um, if I promise not to hound you like crazy (on any or all of your stories... I'm working on getting a life. lol.) I don't suppose you'd write more of this? hmm. hmm. hmm.
this was fantastic. seriously. I LOVE how you had him sitting in her house, like before. I mean, I don't. ANGST ALERT! lol. but I loved it.
you didn't do away with Lauren yet in this story. I think you're losing your touch. ;-) haha jk.
man, way to anger me there for a few minutes, with that baby. lol. WHEW. much better, I must say. this is one of the things that you *ahem* could continue the story for... give us more info about it.
right. well. I need more coffee. and those are my thoughts, as I can define them. :-D