New chapter out soon, I hope. PLEASE! I would very much like one... PLEASE!

Hey,please update soon.I'm really interested on how Heero's going to reacted to the news.

please write more this is such a great story

please, please, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I love this story's concept and you are such a great writer that you just HAVE to update.

O! Just when it gets interesting you have to stop it! I really hope you update! And I can't wait to see Hiiro's reaction to the news! Please update!

~SilverAngelCosmos

great fic cant wait to read the next chapter hope u update soon(PLEASE?)

Bad Heero Bad! Not realizing Usagi was with child and your suppose to be the perfect soilder boy! What will his reaction be when she tells him oh I can't wait...but I will have to write more soon!

It is good and I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for writing.

kol

cool story. hurry and update.

very well done! I liked how you went back and forth from Usagi's point of view to Heero's point of view. It made it more suspenseful and interesting, as well as keeping my attention.

I can tell that you worked really ** this chapter. I also like how you left the question of "Is she going to tell Heero now?" at the end. Keeps us all in suspense!

~dj

"I don't know why I bother with this guy, he's antisocial, thinks he's Evel Knievel and hardly speaks! Ah! Why don't you just give up and stop pretending to be human?"- Duo

Good story you have here. Hmm, so let's see if I have this right. It's after the Colonial Revolution of AC 195, but possibly before the Barton Foundation Incident in AC 196. However, Lady Une is not a Colonel but a Lieutenant.

Meanwhile, I take the mad doctors of Doctor J, Professor G, Doktor S, Instructor H, Master O, Doctor Howard, Doktor M, Doctor Layon and Doctor K are still alive.

Before I forget congrats to Heero & Serena Yuy. I hope Heero is smart enough to not name Duo Maxwell guardian of his child nor Mina. That would be disasterous.

Keep up the good work. HT/DM forever.

K, this one took me much longer. You done a good job. You shouldn't have paniced so much over this one. It's sounds great. Wonderfully descriptive and fulfilling while setting a good mood to it. There's a bump in the flow of the chapter somewhere around the middle but I couldn't work out what was causing it. Maybe you'll have better luck.
Near the end you have "but she couldn’t ignore his ignorance any longer". It sounds slightly funny. Too repetative. You might want to concider changing it to something like "but she couldn’t allow his ignorance any longer", but it's intirely up to you of course.

Love ya,
Lita

Ps. Nasty cliffie too! You're so evil...
I love it!

*sighs* I can tell you're going to make people OOC by this prologue. Since when did Heero care that he killed someone? He was trained to not feel any emotions or regrets when he kills remember? He seems so... Trowa and/or Quatre-ish.
I reviewed two of your fics and this must be your newest one yet you still get people OOC. Serena seems to be more... serious than her true nature. And if she's married to Heero I would think she's used to his 'cold hearted' ways. And if she didn't like it, then I doubt she'd marry him. Right?
I'll be waiting for the next chapter to either criticize, like this one, or praise it. I'll see where you're leading this too. If it holds any OOC I will obviously complain about that whether you like it or not. I'm a spoiled 13 year-old, get to use to it.
Rebellious Gurl
p.s.: Comments? Flames? Send them to my e-mail.

Love the Idea keep it going.