I thought this story was really good, sort of like a "beginning" for an end. You know? It's sort of hard to explain, but I think this is one of my favorite stories than the other Anime stories. I really enjoyed this one, not because it was sentimental, but because it was very profound. Keep up the good work (although I'm very late on the reveiw, VERY)

Jessica

awww...wittle marron was so cute! acted kinda cold, thou...but he was still cute! i like this one a lot _

Great story! Nice plot too. Like the little future bit and the rest was great. keep it up! :)

great fic, loved marron, especially the youre not my momma part

Grammatically perfect - which really makes it flow very smoothly. Made me want to cry. It's stunningly good. Please write more!

that was really cute! -_- and the thing at the end bout chocolate, was funny!

Mm... Good insight, cool fic... And the chibi kyoudai are so cute! .

Wow.

Greaty story love Marron!

*stands in the balance of laughing and crying, but cracks up at the swamp reference* Wicked!

I adore your magnificent work. This must have been the very best Sorcerer Hunters fanfiction I have ever had the privilage of reading. The characters have remained true to themselves, and the entire concept was absolutley ... ano ... I am unsure of whether to use 'adorable' or 'touching'? Perhaps both will do. [smiles] Keep up the wonderful work - I hope to see more from you in the future!

Wow... that was a great fan fic, such insightfulness!

Waaaaiii! That's what me sez! Waaaaiii! I love this story! Layla you have a great talent and that certain "writer's charm" tee hee. I urge you to do more. I love Marron! La la la...

Dariue and Virtue be yours!

Fala

It's so cute... *picks up chibi marron and coddles him* It's nice to indulge in a little sappy sibling-ness occassionally, ne?

intresting. Likable.