 ScottishFaerie 2006-10-17 . chapter 1VERRY nice!! |
 Phoenix Flight 2004-03-20 . chapter 1 I love it! |
 Tant 2004-03-05 . chapter 1 I love this story. ::hugs Brethil and Glirel:: I hope there are more stories about Glirel. |
 Jazmin3 Firewing 2004-02-11 . chapter 1 HA! Funny! And so sweet! I like Acharn's real name better than the one that awful tale gave him! Write more like this, you've got skill! |
 wellduh... 2004-01-26 . chapter 1 Is he supposed to really resemble Beren? With the dog and the one hand and everything?
Fascinating follow-up to that other one with Acharn. Keep it up! |
 Venyatuima 2004-01-17 . chapter 1Well, remind me never to get into a snowball fight with elves, lol. *grins* I like happy tales. And Brethil always makes me laugh ^.^ |
 UbiquitousPitt 2004-01-16 . chapter 1Hmph! The IDEA of Thranduil suggesting (even jesting) that Tanglinna's aim was 'OFF'--!
As usual, a cacophony of epiphanic reviews in no suitable order but what suits my attention deficit disorder...
Well, it is so lovely to see Acharn again. I felt pity for him and the sadness of his story. Yet his soul SEEMED gentle and there he was just living in the woods when Thranduil's warm hall was so near. Bless Acharn!
You made Tavor an elf of the race of Noldor! WELL! To say I'm not surprised |:) But, I must know, are all Noldor's sopranos??
I like how richly layered this story was. Different plots going on at once, but not so many that they confuse you, and each scene is not so long as to make you forget about the scenes you'd read before and in which sequence they ran. I find both those tendencies to have been the downfall of many promising Star Wars' authors. That, and a complete lack of talent. Yeah. But -this- is a well-crafted story.
"Impetuous pointy-eared child!"
HAHAHA! That's definitely my favourite line.
I thought Beorn was an interesting addition, Tree. I always hoped he'd show up in one of your fictions. He's a burly sortuva colourful character. Makes sense him and Acharn would hike about the darker side of the wood and respect each other’s presence(s).
"I wondered why anyone would want to be named Acharn." ROFL! That just takes me back to reading the Harry Potter books... "HM. I wonder why anyone would want to name their child 'wolf' when their last name means 'moon'." Heehee
Oh, this is a lovely story - everything is described so vividly, but simplistically. Hm. Does that make sense? C'mon. I have a limited vocabulary, here. Anyway, it's the GOODEST story.
AHA! And you mention Radagast, too!! I would like to write some stories about Radagast. I have my own inklings of him. Though he is quite mumbly rumbly and ever forgetful and getting lost in his very own wood.
AW! Brethil - darling Brethil - just a'talkin away. And um. Away. And away...
Your phrasing and Tolkien-speak was darned impressive this turn around! I also love your characters, in general, y'know. And now Acharn is one of my favourites up there with (all the main cast inc'.) Galion, Egla Ash, and *shudder* the twin terrors. Though I know the twins aren't yours, but you give them the personality I now acquaint them with--!
*shiver* Brethil reminds me overwhelmingly of someone I used to date. Though - his new 'bow and at service' element is charming, indeed! Gah, he's fleshed out substantially since "Whisper of Things to Come"...
"then I suppose I will die very soon . . .at the end of your hook." ROFLMAO! I love this story! Aww, I love Brethil even more than I did before ^_^ Bless.
OO - I really liked Donweth's "acceptance" speech. That puts a strong backbone into the story. I shall add this to my favourites.
This is great - it was so very funny and yet touching and serious in it's way. Which is that ol Treehugger style I've always loved - it just keeps getting better and better with age, trial and error. This story made me smile and gave me a warm feeling in my cold-ol'-evil heart. |
 Ranger ari 2004-01-04 . chapter 1That was wonderful! Brethil was so thoughtful, and quite amusing too.:) I'm glad Glirel got a Yuletide miracle; he seemed lonely. A really lovely holiday tale; I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I loved reading it! *grins* Brethil the talkative elf *hugs Brethil* |
 the evil witch queen 2004-01-04 . chapter 1oh the tales they could tell about each other! i love to hear them.
that was great. poor acharn, sorry, glirel, so misunderstood. must be fun to meet a 'ghost'.
well, good story. keep upthe good work! |
 Mayhem21 2003-12-30 . chapter 1It's always so much fun to read a story about Brethil! I think that if he had been able to continue to live in Mirkwood, he could have become a great healer. He seems to care so much that I can't help but picture him as a healer.
Glirel seems to be very polite. I wonder how he earned the nick-name of Acharn...and that most-interesting story...hmm.
Didn't Oropher call Tanglinna Silver and Celair Sable in one of your stories? Knife's Edge, perhaps? I seem to remember that...oh well.
^_^ |
 Erestor 2003-12-29 . chapter 1Why do you keep on inventing these wonderful characters? How do you do it? They're all so good and interesting. Brethil is such a lovely Elf. |
 kingmaker 2003-12-24 . chapter 1To what do we owe this pleasure? Two yule tales in one year?
Though it was a spot predictable, it was nevertheless heartwarming and fun to read. Brethil was very amusing, and elf's new best friend is great- an elven warg rider indeed!
Thank you for this followup to your amusing Halloween tale, and have a merry Christmas. |
 Lutris 2003-12-23 . chapter 1 Happy Yule for you too! This is a wonderful story! I inmensely liked Beorn's appearance and Glirel's real character. Brethil rules! I love when he starts talking! ;) |
 Hel 2003-12-23 . chapter 1 Happy Yule to you too.
Great that you write another story about Glirel and a second Yule-time story.
But I don´t think that Thranduil and Tanglinna will ever live this story down. It is really a funny picture to imagine those two running screaming back to the palace. |
 Donweth's owner - owned by Donweth 2003-12-23 . chapter 1 This story is so sweet! I love it! Especially the bits with Brethil and of course those with 'Donweth'. You write him very well, I recognize my elf in him.
Thank you for writing this tale! |