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| storyfreak 2004-08-16 ch 1, | abuse** that was a curve ball! I thought that it was the other way around. |
| MRS-SPOT-FUCKING-CONLON 2004-07-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseYEAH.. I JS READ IT THROU AND IT ALL FIT... MANY ENEMIES... SKIN AND STUFF BLENDS IN WITH THE WHITE CLOTH MATERIAL... HEHE ANDYWAYS... REALLY NICE |
| MRS-SPOT-FUCKING-CONLON 2004-07-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW.. THAT WAS A STRANGE TWIST... THIS FIC IS SO SAD! I LOVE DARK FICS.. YOURE WONDERFUL! |
| LadyDraco917 2004-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was marvelous. The ending was such a twisted shock. Especially because through the entire story it sounds like it's Draco. Your story is wonderfully dark and the ending is almost bittersweet. I love how you were able to write an entire story without identifying the characters until the end. The confusion makes the final realization at the end all the more shocking. I love your writing style, but just a tip, be very careful and edit your stories before posting. Little spelling and grammar errors really take away from the beauty of your story. |
| LadyDraco917 2004-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was marvelous. The ending was such a twisted shock. Especially because through the entire story it sounds like it's Draco. Your story is wonderfully dark and the ending is almost bittersweet. I love how you were able to write an entire story without identifying the characters until the end. The confusion makes the final realization at the end all the more shocking. I love your writing style, but just a tip, be very careful and edit your stories before posting. Little spelling and grammar errors really take away from the beauty of your story. |
| LadyDraco917 2004-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was marvelous. The ending was such a twisted shock. Especially because through the entire story it sounds like it's Draco. Your story is wonderfully dark and the ending is almost bittersweet. I love how you were able to write an entire story without identifying the characters until the end. The confusion makes the final realization at the end all the more shocking. I love your writing style, but just a tip, be very careful and edit your stories before posting. Little spelling and grammar errors really take away from the beauty of your story. |
| LadyDraco917 2004-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was marvelous. The ending was such a twisted shock. Especially because through the entire story it sounds like it's Draco. Your story is wonderfully dark and the ending is almost bittersweet. I love how you were able to write an entire story without identifying the characters until the end. The confusion makes the final realization at the end all the more shocking. I love your writing style, but just a tip, be very careful and edit your stories before posting. Little spelling and grammar errors really take away from the beauty of your story. |
| LadyDraco917 2004-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was marvelous. The ending was such a twisted shock. Especially because through the entire story it sounds like it's Draco. Your story is wonderfully dark and the ending is almost bittersweet. I love how you were able to write an entire story without identifying the characters until the end. The confusion makes the final realization at the end all the more shocking. I love your writing style, but just a tip, be very careful and edit your stories before posting. Little spelling and grammar errors really take away from the beauty of your story. |
| sureynot 2004-07-06 ch 1, | abusewell... wasnt expecting that very good mucho bueno (im not sure what that means but i think it mean very good) |
| TheDragonDancer 2004-06-28 ch 1, | abuseThis story was... I don't know how to describe it. Dark, creepy, exciting. But It was so confusing! I had to read it several times and I still did not completely understand: Harry kidnapped Draco? I think this must be so, but a some of it seemed more like Draco was the one hunting Harry... Ah... -=confusion=- I love it though, the fact that is confusing is the best part. |
| Just another fangirl 2004-04-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was simply -beautiful-. I guess it helped that I was listening to that very same .hack//sign music, though. ^^ **Purr** I think it fits this piece rather well, actually. And now I'm gonna toddle off to see if you've done anything else. |
| Lyn 2004-01-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was an utterly beautiful peice. The ending was a surprising twist that I would have never expected. This is wonderfully dark, yet completely believable. I must applaud you in your ability to keep the reader enraptured. |