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Reviews For: False Wings

storyfreak
2004-08-16
ch 1,
abuse** that was a curve ball! I thought that it was the other way around.
MRS-SPOT-FUCKING-CONLON
2004-07-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseYEAH.. I JS READ IT THROU AND IT ALL FIT... MANY ENEMIES... SKIN AND STUFF BLENDS IN WITH THE WHITE CLOTH MATERIAL... HEHE ANDYWAYS... REALLY NICE
MRS-SPOT-FUCKING-CONLON
2004-07-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseWOW.. THAT WAS A STRANGE TWIST... THIS FIC IS SO SAD! I LOVE DARK FICS.. YOURE WONDERFUL!
LadyDraco917
2004-07-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was marvelous. The ending was such a twisted shock. Especially because through the entire story it sounds like it's Draco. Your story is wonderfully dark and the ending is almost bittersweet. I love how you were able to write an entire story without identifying the characters until the end. The confusion makes the final realization at the end all the more shocking. I love your writing style, but just a tip, be very careful and edit your stories before posting. Little spelling and grammar errors really take away from the beauty of your story.
LadyDraco917
2004-07-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was marvelous. The ending was such a twisted shock. Especially because through the entire story it sounds like it's Draco. Your story is wonderfully dark and the ending is almost bittersweet. I love how you were able to write an entire story without identifying the characters until the end. The confusion makes the final realization at the end all the more shocking. I love your writing style, but just a tip, be very careful and edit your stories before posting. Little spelling and grammar errors really take away from the beauty of your story.
LadyDraco917
2004-07-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was marvelous. The ending was such a twisted shock. Especially because through the entire story it sounds like it's Draco. Your story is wonderfully dark and the ending is almost bittersweet. I love how you were able to write an entire story without identifying the characters until the end. The confusion makes the final realization at the end all the more shocking. I love your writing style, but just a tip, be very careful and edit your stories before posting. Little spelling and grammar errors really take away from the beauty of your story.
LadyDraco917
2004-07-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was marvelous. The ending was such a twisted shock. Especially because through the entire story it sounds like it's Draco. Your story is wonderfully dark and the ending is almost bittersweet. I love how you were able to write an entire story without identifying the characters until the end. The confusion makes the final realization at the end all the more shocking. I love your writing style, but just a tip, be very careful and edit your stories before posting. Little spelling and grammar errors really take away from the beauty of your story.
LadyDraco917
2004-07-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was marvelous. The ending was such a twisted shock. Especially because through the entire story it sounds like it's Draco. Your story is wonderfully dark and the ending is almost bittersweet. I love how you were able to write an entire story without identifying the characters until the end. The confusion makes the final realization at the end all the more shocking. I love your writing style, but just a tip, be very careful and edit your stories before posting. Little spelling and grammar errors really take away from the beauty of your story.
sureynot
2004-07-06
ch 1,
abusewell... wasnt expecting that

very good
mucho bueno (im not sure what that means but i think it mean very good)
TheDragonDancer
2004-06-28
ch 1,
abuseThis story was... I don't know how to describe it. Dark, creepy, exciting. But It was so confusing! I had to read it several times and I still did not completely understand: Harry kidnapped Draco? I think this must be so, but a some of it seemed more like Draco was the one hunting Harry... Ah... -=confusion=- I love it though, the fact that is confusing is the best part.
Just another fangirl
2004-04-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was simply -beautiful-. I guess it helped that I was listening to that very same .hack//sign music, though. ^^ **Purr** I think it fits this piece rather well, actually. And now I'm gonna toddle off to see if you've done anything else.
Lyn
2004-01-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis was an utterly beautiful peice. The ending was a surprising twist that I would have never expected. This is wonderfully dark, yet completely believable. I must applaud you in your ability to keep the reader enraptured.
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