Oh, please! There is no way that Harry and/or Snape would stand around inside the Riddle House arguing with the others. Hello! They would be concentrating on escaping! You should work on your characterizations. That is, your characters should act and respond in ways that make sense for them. This means that Harry, who is on a rescue mission would be concentrating on rescuing.

This story is incredibly confusing, incredibly funny and just plain incredible. I like your caustic, one-liner sort of style, because you make it an easy read without becoming boring. I'll read the seaquels later, you've gotten me hooked. Since I'm one of those people who like to pair everyone, I'm wondering about Hermione. In this story, there's a lot of potential on the SS/HG pairing (kinda gross, but ah well), but I'll read the other stories to see more. I really liked the way Harry and Ginny got together, in the books it was so shallow and well, blergh. HBP is my least favourite book, JKR does NOT know how to write romance. That being said, keep up the good work ^_^

This was good. I love the Tempus Fugit spell... *dances*. Thank ye! It would be great to have more time taking a test! *chuckles* I shall get around to reading the rest soon hopefully.

- Miss.

Did you know that a sequence in mathematics is "is an ordered list of objects (or events). Like a set, it contains members (also called elements or terms), and the number of terms (possibly infinite) is called the length of the sequence. Unlike a set, order matters, and the exact same elements can appear multiple times at different positions in the sequence." Where as a series is the sum of a sequence.
So each story is made up of a sequence of spefic events that can be repeated. When you put all the stories (sequence of events) together it is a series.

i LOVED that ending! with the wizard of oz video! wow. it was great.

i didnt get the crying thing. why was it so funny when ginny was crying?

I liked it, even with all of those Wizard of Oz references! It was good!
Sincerely,
Motherlyclucker

You are one of the most awesomest (not a word...o well!) writers out there! I love ur story and especially how u qoute things from books, songs, and poems!!

any way even though I believe Ron and Hermione are PERFECT for each other, I do like how you did Ron and Luna!

and even though i think you do ALL the charactors (Harry, Ron, Luna, Hermione, Ginny, Neville, Snape, Dumbledore, Voldemort, Malfoy, Sibyll, the marauders, Cho, ...Colin! and well everyone else!)as close to how JK writes them as anyone I know, you still manage to have a Ron and Luna romance when in the books I don't think they go together...

Hm... what else? O Yea!! I love how you had Ginny take Harry to the rainbow and then harry confessed his love to her (and her to him)!

And I love that YOU SAVED SIRIUS! :-D

and that Luna CUT VOLDEMORTS THUMB OFF! LMFAO!! That was hilarious!

and I love the 'Time Flies' spell! Thats awesome!

and that Harry's ansesters look like him! (or rather he looks like them!)

And I love how you had aunt Petunia give Harry money for Ginny!! I always thought she was nice deep down!!

And I pretty much just love this sequence!

KEEP IT UP!

awsome!

Lovley story. there is only one problem with it, you keep calling Ginny virginia. JKR says on her web-site that her name is in fact Ginevra, She is acutally quite adament about this, you may want to consider updateing your stories

this is so stupid.
first telling Him all about the chamber.
than letting himself curse many times.
omg i can't read anymore of this **

This story is amazing. Love it!

i love the idea of the grindelwald/WW2 idea. an inspiration from the start of the 6th book, id guess.
wow, i have to say im very impressed with the part where harry and ginny passed the not quite human, long haired individual. it was sufficently creepy, it gave me chills. and this character is going to become important later i presume? particularly if he looked familiar.
fantastic, revise the next chapter soon!

Great story, i had fun reading it. I have to wonder though, about your treatment of Hermione, it seemed like you had absolutely no love for her, if you know what i mean. I admit it bugs me quite a bit, but it doesn't deter from the story, so i won't make a big deal of it. Great story, i'll be sure to check out the rest of the sequence.

Cheers!

This chapter was certainly...pleasant. I'm happy to note that the scene between Harry and Ginny seemed to me appropriately awkward, but not contrived, which is something that has ruined other would-be great stories i have seen. I find myself impressed once again, you have a gift for this.

Cheers!