Suna-chan: Truelly, I do not consider what you wrote as a flame. I view more as help. I read what you wrote, and thank you for the advice, But honestly, this story is different than you think. The characters are NOT perphect. Just better in some views. May has some serius issues if you havnt noticed. Also, my flame eating gerbil perphers Barbie heads over flames! The reason I even put it there is as a piece of Humor. Nuthing more. I know that iw ill get bad reviews, as do most other authors. And I will read them and learn from them. I have a spell checker and a beta reader (where ever she went) And also, This is my first REAL Fanfic. One more thing. I hate to write yes, But that is because I don’t like moving pencils around that much. I much prefer drawing. But I love to type, because it is faster and more officent. If you would like to become my new beta reader I would like that, since your eye is better at catching things than mine.
On a lighter note- Your story is good, but I have one thing tha ti am sure annoys some people. Try not to put your authors notes in the Story it’s self. But over all, it was funny and made me laugh. I thank you for takeing the time to write what you did.

Oh my god...I think I've just been scarred for life... *coughs and blushes* Interesting li'l ficcy, though. ^_^

Serenity's Japanese name is Shizuka Katsuya! ^__^ Kool fic!

*suffocates from lack of air* YOU WEREN'T LYING! THIS IS SO FUNNY! I LOVE IT! Don't worry, twisted is good! ^_^