I have to admit I half expected that Jessie would be a typical OC in the way that she would be loved by everyone, everyone's best friend and would destroy the other characters however Jessie seemed very natural and fit in well without being the loved character. She didn't seem to take anything from the Tribe characters and I liked how she isolated herself emotionally after she had been found. I thought it a little odd that Ellie wanted her to leave knowing how dangerous it could be for her friend but at the same time I can understand how Ellie felt.

this is an interesting story and an original concept. i'm surprised you haven't had any reviews. i thought it was written well. and i also liked the idea that jessie's city had handled the virus situation differently than it's neighbors. funny, the mallrats would have fared much better had they followed jessie home. instead they were over run by technos and half of their friends were taken or deleted. i wonder what gave you this idea. my only complaint would be your little notes in every chapter. a story should speak for itself. the author shouldn't have to. not bad.