   Tech-Man 2006-09-19 . chapter 1Very nice. |
| couple.freak 2006-08-05 . chapter 1 OMG your story it's pretty cool!! I enjoy it! please update soon!
Sayonara! |
| lacey 2006-02-12 . chapter 1 aw! |
 Swimgirl251 2005-09-07 . chapter 1LOVE IT. Keep it up.:) |
 thefanwithashortattentionspan 2005-08-16 . chapter 1YAY!
rob/star fluff!
great story! ;)
loved it!
very faving this!!
too cute innit? |
| StarryTian 2005-07-31 . chapter 1 Sososososoosososososososososososoo sweet! I loved it! And don't worry about putting too much fluff in it. Some people (aka. me) like fluff! Yay! Fluff! Hm... sounds like a good doggy name: Fluff. Anyways, I would advise you not to put so many author notes in there, because it sorta ruins the moment. well, that's all! |
 Dlvvanzor 2005-06-19 . chapter 1:) |
 Hiei's Ice Maiden 2005-06-12 . chapter 1This is really good, I liked it!! |
 faux nostalgia 2005-05-29 . chapter 1adding to my c2 (if you don't mind...) |
| Jay Roxy 2004-09-06 . chapter 1 Great Story! luved it! Update soon! |
| moezy-chan 2004-08-21 . chapter 1 Wonderful story! I absolutely loved it! |
| darkmonkey 2004-07-25 . chapter 1 liked the story. very cute. By the way, robin eye's actually are blue if he's dick grayson. But if he's tim, they're brown. Yeah it's kinda confusing with all the controversy on who he is, but all that matters is who you want him to be. ; ) |
| Twin-Lupus (too lazy to sign in lol) 2004-07-25 . chapter 1 How sweet! What a great Christmas story! Yay! |
| All American 2004-07-15 . chapter 1 I don't think you needed to make it dark Iloved how fluffy it was.
-AA |
| Adamant Eve aka anna-neko 2004-06-26 . chapter 1 I hopped on to this fic, mainly because it will take some time for me to review "Misfits", so I went for this short and sweet piece for the meantime. I must say that I liked it very much, for several reasons. The quality of the writing was excellent. I was pleased to read a piece that didn't have sentences fleeing for their lives (a.k.a. The Run On Sentence). Watch out for puctuation pitfalls, though. We all make those mistakes, but it always bears mentioning. A capable beta reader is always an excellent idea. The best authors have them because there is no such thing as a perfect self-edited draft. I was also glad you kept the kissing scene nice and simple. I have read countless kissing scenes where too much description ruined it (where the hands were; how he was holding her; too much tongue... yadda, yadda...). Yours, I could read without cringing. We seem to have a similar take on Star and Robin's relationship ::laughs:: so yes, of course, I think you've handled that aspect quite well.
I look forward to "Misfits". ^_^
Read you soon. |
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