Rhiannon Hunter 2008-10-25 . chapter 22i love this story its so awesome |
POOPSICLES 2008-09-16 . chapter 20 OMGOMGOMG.
your story's so awesome.
;3;
I LOVE LOVE LOVE TIKKU. |
zutarafn1 2008-08-30 . chapter 22i loved this whole story so far. i was so happy when you finally made tidus and rikku kiss! i can't wait until you finish this story. please update it real soon! |
Mr. Nice Guy 2008-08-07 . chapter 22Keep the chapters coming. |
Sawy 2008-08-07 . chapter 22 Ok... Absolutely amazing... I like your story a lot! I trust you when you says:
"Many authors let their stories die out, especially ones that have lasted as long as this one. I however, would never do that to you guys, and I can assure you that the minute I am finished with the revamp the story will continue with chapter 19."
So I will wait every chapter until the end with impatience !
By the way english is not my main language hope you understand :P |
Scott-17 2008-07-14 . chapter 19Giid story so far, this is my first ffx fanfic. |
razer 2008-07-09 . chapter 1 update please please please? XD |
razer 2008-07-08 . chapter 22 I like your story! I want to read everything all the way to the ending ! please update soon so i wont get crazy XD |
PHAZONFUELEDKID 2008-07-05 . chapter 22 Dude, THIS IS AWESOME! I mean, really, you are an awesome writer! I can honestly say that this story would have made a much better game than FFX did. And I'm not just saying that because I have a major prefrence for Tikku instead of... what would it be called? Putting Tidus with Yuna? Tuna? Ha, that's funny...
Anyway, what I really like is that you address stuff that the game leaves out. Seriously, that makes a HUGE difference. When I played the game, it was really an on and off thing for me, playing once in a while. But I've read this entire story in one go. That's how awesome it is. I'm just glad that they are finally together after all that time! I feel you also did a perfect job with the character's personalities. But my favorite part so far would be when all (or at least most) of lies come down, and everyone learns about Rikku and Tidus being Al Bhed. I can't wait for Yuna and everyone to find out that they are together. It will be interesting if no one had seen it coming, but I think they all probably suspected it(except Wakka, so play off his suprise!).
Ok, so I'm obligated to give you constructive critisism, I suppose... Hm... Well, the only thing I see wrong is that you might be sticking too close to the game's plot. Try to make it a bit more different from the game.
Let's see, I've covered going on and on about how awesome you are, my favorite part, and I given you a bit of constructive critisism, so what's left to say? Oh, now I remember! UPDATE SOON, OR MY MINION HORDES WILL STEAL YOUR PRECIOUS COOKIES! I mean it! |
benjamin 2008-07-05 . chapter 22 We want 23! |
Benjamin Freeman 2008-06-29 . chapter 22 Are you continueing this or not? |
Kitsune6 2008-06-26 . chapter 22Aww, I wanted more Tikku fluff.
Keep up the good work! =) |
Benjamin Freeman 2008-06-21 . chapter 22 Hurry up with the next chapter! |
Selryam 2008-06-19 . chapter 22 You're not dead! Woohoo!
Nice chapter. The whole chapter felt very... calm. You set the mood well, I think, and you do well with the imagery and detail. |
zigyy553 2008-06-16 . chapter 22Quite the story...
well, despite the chpapters being somewhat short by my admittedly high standards, I enjoyed them none the less.
I look foward to the next chpater.
-Zig. |