 speadee 2007-07-03 . chapter 1It's true that Inui's juices can make people faint. The reactions of the characters were so them. |
 Sheik's Lonely 2007-05-29 . chapter 1That was really interesting. Ah, when Oishi is suffering, Eiji feels it. Those two are telepathically linked, after all. |
 KagomeGirl021 2004-12-17 . chapter 1hmm you can put it as an accident batch. im quite interested in how this will turnout if u plan on making more chappies. |
 Ju 2003-12-28 . chapter 1Golden Pair. *_*
...Er. Methinks this is interesting, but tis kinda strange where you left off (unless you plan to continue it?). |
 Regatto 2003-12-25 . chapter 1Oh wow. Very nice! ^^ I like how protective Eiji is! You did a good job with the characterization of Eiji and Oishi! The last observation about Oishi and Eiji's playing being off was a very, very nice touch! ^^
My only grouse is that this is too short, would like to read more.So please write a sequel! Of course I think that you should be getting more reviews!
Gambatte! |