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| LAHIRI 2008-04-12 ch 3, anon. | abuseHI CRAZYA. I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. SUCH A GREAT START TO A SPLENDID STORY. YOU WRITE SO WELL. HOPE YOU HAVEN'T STOPPED WRITING. |
| Toonces 2007-06-13 ch 3,  | abusewow, i just found this story and i think its great. |
| annependragon 2006-12-21 ch 3, | abuseMore please would love to see what is going to happen between these two and centre. Great story so far |
| Sweet.Mione.Potter 2005-07-08 ch 3, | abuseGreat start,this ffc looks really good,i hope that you post more soon and you are doing a great job :) |
| State Hopper 2005-01-17 ch 3, | abuseDude you have a great style, it's fairly calculating yet unexpectidly pleasent, hey like you! See you haven't updated this in agers... where is the new alias fic, why don't you post it here? Or was Untitled it? |
| pretender-gurl 2004-01-21 ch 3, | abuseFabulous. Absolutely wonderful! I love the way you bring Parker and Jarod together without going outside the boundaries of their character. Please continue! |
| MickeyRos 2004-01-17 ch 3, | abuseThis chapter was great even though it was short. I think you've nailed the character of Miss Parker completely. I just don't know what to say about how you've written her other than its wonderful and I can't wait to see what you have in store for Jarod and Parker next. Please continue soon. |
| QuartzWingz 2004-01-17 ch 3, | abuseHey wonderful writer of my dreams. keep writing! At first, in the beginning-I couldn't take how vulnerable they both were! I wanted to exit and never come back! But that's the problem with love sappy getting the child to make them together kind of love. You and me seem to share something in common that in the fact that Jarod and Miss Parker seemed to love eachother in the first place. Just not sure how to confront it. Keep up the great work! |
| michelle 2004-01-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseI like it. Nice job having them work together but still keeping with their characters. post again soon! |
| michelle 2004-01-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseI like it. Nice job having them work together but still keeping with their characters. post again soon! |
| nelle 2004-01-11 ch 2, anon. | abuseThere are lot of fanfics about MP becoming pregnant but so far I think the best characterization of MP in this situation I've read is the one in your story!! She'll never let Jarod get control of her life nor will she let Raines. It's gonna be difficult for you to write the next chapters ... Trade carefully and you might write the best MP becoming pregnant story ever! |
| leochick 2004-01-10 ch 2, | abuseI like your story alot. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Sango2 2004-01-09 ch 2, anon. | abuseMORE! MORE!. ;^) |
| QuartzWingz 2004-01-07 ch 2, anon. | abusegreat story! keep up the great work. I've heard several stories of Parker becoming pregnant, and some were bad and some were great but lets see what this story will partake in it's fate. hehehehe...i like to ryme... |
| michelle 2004-01-06 ch 2, anon. | abuseYet another spin on Jarod and Parker having a child. Great story . . . post again soon! |