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KageOkami-Kogo 2008-03-05 . chapter 1
*Squeals* That was SO kawaii!! I loved it!! Great job!! Write more! Write mroe! *Pulls a Goten* :D :D
minako 2005-06-26 . chapter 1
i am all hyper now cos the first time i heard this song i thought of gohan and videl and even sang it with the go han, go han bit..i am so happy i wasnt the only one!!
great fic!!
Heavenly Moments 2004-01-08 . chapter 1
Everything was excellent about it except the length. (Just a suggestion)...How about you continue the story,..build on Videl/Gohan Relationship.
Anyway,..good.
reader#1 2003-12-24 . chapter 1
hey i really liked your fic it was really great. i liked the part where videl handed gohan the wrong beaker that was pretty funny. the only criticism i have about your fic is that it wasnt long enough (i wanted more :-(
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