I love this story, it's so cute, love the love.

this is so cute

LOL! I was just going to Riku's part, where he says "Why me..?" Then, "I Won't Say I'm In Love" from Hercules started to play on my playlist. I cracked. Even my PlayList thinks they are destined together! Hahahahhaha!!

... Ouch... Last line has to hurt... like... ouch...

Wow. That was very good. It's definately an interesting take on both Sora and Riku. I loved it all the same. Good story.

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its the last chapter!NO!
*grabs bowl of random fruit to hurl at you*
im just kidding ^^
it was so cute!
and RIku in shiny panties 0_0 heheheheh
oh wait...thats a different rating category, lol
thank god you didnt put in any male pregnatcy...i would have fainted...
ANYWAYZ...i had originally thought the story was about the older charaters, but then i read the red jumpsuit line.I was like "huh"?!?!? and then i saw when this was written...before KH2 even came out lol.

IT WAS SO AWESOME!
l love you...and The Ambitious Blank for their help?(well helping you write this) i think? yea...

-Jojobeans93

You know, I never liked Kairi b/c she was the love intrest to keep Sora and Riku apart. But you write her in a way that makes me feel sorry for her. Grr on you! ^.^

Oh! The fruit has a horrible side effect...
It causes... male pregnancy!
Hehe.
Oh! Wait... I'm suddenly getting a great idea for a story.
Oh, no...

Anyway, thought that comment about Sora now being pregnant was just adorable.

I read this and...it was good! ^-^ I liked it, this is like...the first fluff I've really read, cause I'm usually not into all that. But you changed me, I guess fluff is good every once in awhile.

I really liked it, could you write a long chapter story? I would love to read it! I would reveiw it for every chap.! ^-^

Update something soon!

~Angel of Deceit

OMG YUSH I LOVE IT *3*

funny i like it

Me: *is 2 busy preparing rotten veggies 2 throw at u cuz it wuz 2 short 2 actually review*
Kawaii: okay, to make this a normal review, we need one of us 2 act like TsukiKunai... i cant, i hafta insult her sumhow, she accidentally created me like that. u cant, u rnt even listening.
Kyuubi: im listening! um, y do we need 2 act like TsukiKunai anyway?
Kawaii: i know u were listening, i was simply trying 2 demonstrate 2 the author y u cant act like her.
Kyuubi: huh?
Kawaii: u see?

I loved this story! and I loved "Inevitable Disillusion!" They are both so fun! well this one was more fun and giggly when the other one was mainly sad. If you havent read that one read it! I wish this one was longer b/c its just so great!

~Kelly

I really loved this story. It's definately one of my favorite Riku/Sora ones.

Oh my, how could Riku break the sacred rules of kissing? Lol, I love this story so much! Kudos to you.