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Reviews For: Fallen

authorialintent
2004-12-18
ch 1,
abuseI /love/ this line: "And the death of the priest sent his pupil sailing away on a firm breeze like an agile paper airplane dipping confidently into the clouds, growing smaller and smaller as it slid away."

Ah, I don't suppose it's too much to *nudge* you for more Saiyuki?
Aera-Chan
2004-08-22
ch 1,
abusei liked this, it was good and sad, poor shuei ^^ i like this pairing hehe im a big shota fan ahahahah >
wetheril
2004-06-05
ch 1,
abuseThis is a nice character piece for Shuei! ^^ Even if the anime doesn't clarify, I totally agree with your viewpoint that Shuei definitely felt something for Kouryuu. Too bad there aren't enough fics about him. ^^ Will there be a sequel? Please? ^^
hakkai-san
2003-12-25
ch 1, anon.
abusei love this. it's so beautiful, the words powerful that you can feel his anguish. the epsiodes you mentioned weren't my favorites cuz i dun understand that shuuei guy. but ur fic gave me such a valuable insight and for that i thank you. yeah, ganbatte yo! (",)
Konzen
2003-12-25
ch 1, anon.
abusei don't usually read anything whith shouenai implications, but this is absolutely beautiful. It's vivid, passionate... it's just brilliant!
KarotsaMused
2003-12-24
ch 1,
abusewow. *drools* in-n-credible, in both terms of imagery (fantastic how you avoid most of the cliches about violet eyes and blonde hair) and handling of the subject matter. your writing is intense...sublime stuff. I really enjoyed reading this.
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