Bit creepy, but that clan as a whole is weird. An intresting idea though, and a good study of Hanabi.

creepy yet wow.

that was twisted and epic :3

So messed up.

I like it.

It's so dark...I LOVE IT! Especially since Hanabi looks so gone,so twisted by her family every time I see her on screen. It would be fitting,and scarily reflective of the Narutoverse for her to be so bent on the inside. I love the little nod towards neji/Hina and how it just fuels Hanabi's little fire.

I can't tell if Hiinabi's POV is just that of a young child who doesn't know better or that of an obsessed sister...although i do like how she's willing to accept Naruto into her world.

That was wonderful.

Vaugely disturbing.

But wonderful.

It was very simple, and I think it captured Hanabi at that time very well. cause we all know she was kind of a brat.

But the kitten part just made me giggle. *grins*

Anyways, it was very good, and I loved it.

Hanabi scares me O_O ... a lot... That's even creepier than the way Itachi thinks, and that's saying something...

read.

Dark and twisted and perfect.

I love Hanabi wanting Naruto to eat Neji up with small bites.

I would like to coin a new phrase...cute-creepy. This is cute-creepy. So simple and twisted and dark. Reminded me of Lord of the Flies. I love the line "forever and ever and every time she looks in the mirror". It creeped me out very thoroughly, and I shall laugh nervously and sleep with the lights on. I also enjoyed the choppy writing style ( as in the line "..Hinata is weak is not a true Hyuga don't want her as our heir so weak no good to us.") because I actually do this myself, and it was a joy to see someone else do it. In short: five stars, have a cookie.

A beautifully unique story. I am adding this to my favorites.

I love how seemingly innocent this story is, and how you have really displayed it in the point of view of a child. I also like how intuitive Hanabi is, yet paradoxically, she is very simplistic- as children oft are. I especially loved how you incorporated Naruto and Neji in the whole mix.

You rock my Casbah!

Nice job. The description kinda threw me though. I'm glad it wasn't what I thought it would be. I've always hoped that maybe this is the way that Hinabi secretly feels. Anyways, my favourite line was "... he looks at Hinata funny, like he wants to eat her up. Like he can't decide whether to punish or protect her." Call me a dork, but when I read that line my heart skipped a beat.

a bird in the hand is worth two in the bush

but a bird in the kitten is worth five in the hand

so we have ten in the bush and none in the air

and if the bird gets up and spreads its wings

it'll eat us all

these are the screams of children

because

they still believe

when nobody else can be bothered to worry

until they do

until they need to

until it's too late and there's nobody else left to worry for

so we crawl on

and spread our wings

but we'll be back

[love,

The Head Baka]

Twisted in that innocen way which makes the story even better. It's interesting how Hanabi is portrayed with such an innocent mind, yet has that twisted thought process that only young children and psychopaths have.

Love it, faving it, whoo.