 Sophie 2007-08-07 . chapter 1 Hi!
I really LOVE this ending, it's really what should have happened, too bad they lost time with this whole Ben-Laden son in law stuff... It's excellent, Paula is my favorite character! Jessica Steen would really have acted these scenes so well!! |
 TesubCalle 2007-04-20 . chapter 1No idea how I missed this one...Tony/Paula fics are so rare!
Your title is totally misleading, but in a good way. Whatever happened to women preferring their *own* beds? ;-)
This fic showed us part of the Tony/Paula dynamic that was only hinted at in the series, notably in 'Heart Break' and 'Mind Games'. It was very sweet seeing them together in the Italian restaurant. I had a good chuckle with Mama warning Paula about that 'rascal' Tony.
One line that strikes me in particular is when Tony opens the door for Paula: "Always open doors for ladies, a lady goes first..."
After the events of 'Grace Period', that's got to be one door Tony wishes a certain lady didn't go through first.
Very nice job, all 'round. |
 Stargazer83 2005-07-09 . chapter 1He. Putting two players together is fun!
Tony was getting a little two personal, for my taste anyway. I have a feeling that you'd have more luck getting more personal info out of Gibbs.
But... I don't suppose you could be convinced to write another story with Paula in it? |
 Cassandra30 2004-12-26 . chapter 1Good!! Hee hee Always thought so. |
 Stargazer83 2004-09-16 . chapter 1 I have no clue how I missed this one...
Nice snapshot of their relationship. Fits in perfectly with the episodes.
I really enjoyed it.
B. |
 Raindrops on Roses 2003-12-24 . chapter 1Go, Tony! *grin* Great fic! I love the tension between Paula and Tony. And I love how you continue from where they left off on the show--it seems like they abruptly dropped that character.
--Shannon |