cute...it took me a while to realize though that Its Harry and Hermione. I thought Lily was Harry's mom Lily and that her dad was named Harry but then you said something about 'Mione and I was like "What on earth?!" then I figured it out.

Great job! its a cute little ficlet...
~Denierure~

OMG! that was so hilarious!! great job! another cute, sweet, not to mention VERY funny fic you got here!!

Aww! So cute!!

Well that was one heck of a story! Funny!

Among the Roses

Ah, so funny. The W's instead of R's really got on my nerves though.

This is absolutely the CUTEST thing I've ever read! What I like about your writing is that you stayed consistent with Lily's inability to say her 'R's. I've read so many other fics where the author just doesn't stay consistent with this, and it's always so distracting because it's easy to pick out. I love this story...great effort! :)

AW! how adorable! Lily is a pretty name, and I could see HArry naming his daughter that, yu know, his moma nd all. this is the bestest story! I saw mommy kissing santa once too! although, she had to pull down daddys fake beard, so i screamed SANTA IS A FRAUD and ran back to my room. hehe! that was like seven nyears ago though! parents divorced when i was two or three

This was so0 cute, I loved it !
You really are a good writer!

I didn't like all the w's in the r's...it got on my nerves but I like the idea around it. It's sweet.Good job

LOL...that was so cute!! :)

Funniest story I've ever read. Go you.

Aw this was soo cute and pefect..I loved it so much. Merry Christmas.