Oh please do finish! This has been a very riveting fic. What made it so impressive, is the fact that it sounds...credible and extremely insightful in my opinion. IMHO, very few people enjoy insightful fanfics and prefer action packed romace fanfics better. Don't feel bad when you don't get too many reviews, it takes a lot of reading to develop a taste of stories that force people to think. _ So keep writing and hope to read more of it soon.

I really really really REALLY think that u should finish this!I luv this! it's really wonderful!its heart-wrenching at times, but that's y i like it! i really luv it! I took ur sugesstion and read 'a stranger in a strange land' its AMAZING 2!:)hope u continue!

Wow, this story is so difrent, I have to admit it was hard to fallow on the trying to keep reading part, becasue everything was so depresing and stright forward. But it was intreging never the less, the coldness and the understanding and the hidden web you have created keeps me reading. Ir's very poedic and intreaging, it makes you think and see diffrent ascpects on what could have happen in Escaflowne. So basicly I really like this fic. becasue of it's orginilty and deep writing, you as a author have done great in explaning all these hidden emochions and how ironic life can be, please keep writing. (sorry for my spelling) - TigerWolf

HMMMM... different than all i'ver read, but nonetheless, still pretty good. it's a lil awkward, but i like it. pple r stupid sometimes. i know how you can spice it up. put some romance into it. it's still good. i like it. but millie married to dilly? that's one helluva skari thought. what about dryden? he was soooooo cute! oh well, i like your fic, it's got that odd twist to it that i dunt see every day. that's why i like it so much. it's a shame that you wont continue. it really is. i think i saw ur fic b4, but didn't have time to read it. oh well, dunt be discouraged. i like it. honestly. ) people here want to see romance above ne thing else. although hitomi blunt is something new. well, VERY blunt is something new. i like it. please continue!

What's taking so long? I really enjoy your fic and have been waiting forever for the next chapter! PLEASE hurry and continue!

Wow, this is a really good story_I hope you write more to it soon_

cool but... are you really gonna kill off hitomi?

i think this fic is simply brilliant... the way you develop Van's mind is flawless, and the plot is really intrigung. I love Hitomis fatalism. Now hurry up with the next chapters. i just gotta know!

you're doing fine...maybe you should stick to your normal disturbing self _ keep it up and hope my tapes helped you with inspiration...somewhat _

oh. my. god. dilandau an millerna? *falls over in a dead faint* did NOT see that one coming. scares me. *shudders*

OMG...YOU MADE MILERNA AND DILANDAU GET TOGETHER? Whoa...why didn't I think of that? .;

This is a really excellent fic, I hope you get the next chapter out soon! I really like the mood of this story and the way you write it, so simple in a way and yet so complex, so many different images are created by your words.

Man. Hitomi would make a scarey psycologist

This story is amazingly great. i can't believe you're so uncertain about it. What happened to Van? Was he attacked or was he injured because they were tearing apart Escaflowne? I like how you've made the story so dark. Hitomi seems so... Scary, now. And Van reminds me of a court jester, all painted up to look happy while he does everything the king says. *sighs* Great. Brilliant. i can't wait for more.

I love this! You have such an amazing way with words; stringing them together so that they paint a vivid picture. And OMG, Merle is an awesome heroine...very action-oriented. More! Wonderful! Thanks for putting my other chapters up (and the great review-wow-thank you!)...can I link ya? I'm serious when I say that I think your archive is the best :) btw, hotmail is shutting me out...if you need to mail me just send to adios for now.