Wai~! So sweet yet angsty at the same time~! Really well written! Though I don't know what the last line means >.> I don't know Japanese >.< Anyway, write more~!

((Neoangel Rei))
That... was beautiful. *bows in awe and respect*

Wow...that was really beautiful. I think this is the first thing on facfiction.net I've really felt the need to comment on. I loved the way you described Kaworu: 'scarlet eyes and silver hair and alabaster skin'. I don't know what to say really. The whole thing was beautiful, and I enjoyed it. ^_^