MORE! You NEED to write more! I love this one! You can't just leave it there like that! MORE!

You know this one is my favourite out of all of them! Keep it up!

Hi! I just love this story! I always have! I'll see you at school on Monday ( 2-2-04 )...**kisses and hugges**

NOt bad, not bad at all. Be careful with the lenghts of your paragraphs, it's hard to read if they are too long. Great description.

Hiya, i thought i'd read a story and picked this one ^_^ im glad i did too! This is really good. keep it up. bye bye