This story was something else. Like I said, the only real flaw was not seeing their POV as their thoughts became one. Oh well, still a fun ride.

My only real complaint here is that we didn't hear Ryoko and Ayeka's thoughts as they approuched their final merger and became one being. That would have been so cool.

That was a fun read (entertaining, touching, funny). Despite the fact that I can barely remember what happened in the rest of the story... (I guess I'll need to reread it sometime.) Ryeka's decision still seems strange, but at the same time it feels "right". (And as for what you will be writing next, you know which one I'd vote for... The one that we're writing together! Of course, it would help if I found time to work on it as well...)

COOL!

Great ending, I love the way you settled the fact that Tenchi didn't have to choose either girl and neither got left out. The only solution I've seen that is as good is Tenchi marries both Ryoko and Ayeka, but this is more interesting. Any idea on what Tenchi and Ryeka's kids would be like power wise?

ITS GOOD! Me likey! Update pwz! I will love you forever!

u should update soon! i like ya story!

HI! This was one of the best chaps.yet! Plz keep up-dating. Bye!

Hmm, a girl with Ayeka's laugh, Ryoko's temper, and both their powers combined is a pretty scary thought. I pity Noboyuki, I doubt he'll be able to move out of bed for a week if all the girls blasted him at once. Nice story, keep it up!

Pretty good.

Ryeka = more evil than either Ryoko or Ayeka seperately. :)

Good stuff.

Hah Ayeka being able to Use Ryoko's powers thats just brillant. and Nobuyouki is out of prison but now is in hell (Washu's lab) Wonder what hes going to destroy.
Saguya^^

Heh Heh Nobuyuki is where he belongs. Good story I'm loving it. BTW it would be really funny if Ayeka and Ryoko started to merge.
Saguya^^

Hi! I like this story. Plz keep up-dating

WOW! This story was awesome (I only read the first chapter), Ive never read anything so captivating (big word). The way you changed scenes just as I was getting into the one, made me angry, but his father scenes were humorous, and made me lol (I was in school when i read this so when I lol, I got alot of stares). Hope you do more stories!