Aww! So cute! This is my OTP and there isn't nearly enough of it. *adds to favourites*

~Kay~

I loved this story! It was so cute and so true to character!

Well, except the last few lines. Other than that, great work! : )

Oh my god, that was too cute! Seriously, the adorableness of this fic killed me. Fantastic job! Your Fez lines were just awesome. Pie? Adorable! Great job capturing everyone, and also capturing what it feels like to be on the edge of growing up with just one last summer to enjoy.

Aww, that was cuute! :D
And the part I laughed out loud at was Fez suddenly wanting pie, lmao.
Nice writing ^_^
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*squeal* sequal! sequal!

^-^ That was cute.

That was very, very cute. Aww Fez. Aww Kelso. Aww Fez and Kelso.

Yay, I love this pairing! I can't find many stories dedicated to it, though. You did really well! I like! :D

Oh. My. GAWD! YES!! YESYESYES! I'M NOT INSANE! Ahahahahah! *dies* Okay, maybe I am, but NOT because I like Kelso/Fez, coz now I'm not the only one. ^^ I've been looking for a fic between these two FOREVER and a DAY!! And YOU wrote it!!
You also did a really good job. They were all well in charecter. Particularly Fez. Lot's of people who write him leave out his most token traits such as his talking in third person and his constant 'you sonuvabitch!' line. It made me really happy that you remembered those.
ALSO really good job on the other charecters. (I loved the bit with Joan of Arc, I could totally visualize that part happening in the show.) They were all portrayed really well!
Well, I guess the only problem I had was...you need to do more!! MORE MORE MORE!! *dies* I crave more. Now that I've finally read this pairing I can't just go without reading another fic!!
So, I guess I've rambled on enough...what are you still sitting there reading my review for? Go do more of you're beautiful work!! Nwee!! *huggles* I love this...

Being eloquent with words of praise would ruin this moment. Nicely done.

Heyz! Dis story is GREAT! U've made the characters stay true to their personality, while still making dis story hilarious! Are you going to write more chapters? Or is this one chapter the whole story?
PLZ write more chapters!! I think you're a terrific author and can't wait 2 read more of ur work! From Juls!

really funny...the dialog was awsum, i can see them saying those thing.
-Lolly

Aww, sweet! This is a seriously original couple, too. You have earned my respect as an author!
Dil

A little farfetched, but awesome! You stayed true to the characters except for at the end with Kelso! Keep uo the good work!

Oh darlin,
You know I totally loved. I so hoped you would get my request.
I know that slash ain't your thang - but I think you did a great job. Very sweet and subtle (my favorite kind of slash). I love the whole "water slide" thing. Oh the big scary ride no one else would go on -it is like love, a love that is forbidden.
I think you as usual kept everyone beautifully in character. I especially like your Kelso. I think portrayed him perfectly. Fave line: "Kelso rolled his eyes as though it were the most obvious thing in the world. “Easy, Eric. Jackie didn’t love me for the ‘inside’ me. She loved the ‘outside’ me, and c’mon,” he said, gesturing to himself with a sweeping up and down motion, “just look at this foxitude. How could she resist?”.
Ha! Good times. Thank you so much for my Christmas present!