hilarious!

lol thats funny!

please update this fic, please? i wanna know when June/Hermione learns who she really is. please update the fic, i love it so far.

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i'm so confused...

Too bad.

I'm sorry. After seeing the summary, I had to click on the link to find out if you were joking.

Newsflash, dear: same sex twins are identical.

Harry Potter does not look like Ash Ketchum. No way. FYI, I have read all 6 books, seen all 4 movies, seen nearly 3 seasons of Pokémon, and there is just no way they would be identical. They'd have to resemble each other. Plus, your crossover does not flow smoothly. You immediately dump Ash outside the Dursleys' :gasp: Coincidence!

Yes, I know it is a crossover, but crossovers should still have a smooth transition. You can't just open magic portals and poof! everything works wonderfully. It has to flow, and this story is not flowing.

And no, this > "I'm guessing Mew and Celebi had something to do with this. Celebi going back in time to here and Mew opening some sort of portal" < is not an excuse. You didn't even give a full explanation for it, and then Harry's just like, "Cool man! You get to stay with me!" Wouldn't he be a bit confused about Ash, seeing as he's never seen him before? Strangers do not automatically find out they're family and then the world is hugs and kisses.

Although your grammar and spelling seems to be decently consistent, the little conversations between you and your characters are a) not funny, and b)not allowed. Check the guidelines. Script format is not allowed.

Believe it or not, logic does play a part in writing crossover stories.

update!update!update!I want you to update quickly because I really like this fic and I mean it!So . . . . UPDATE!

Hey,
This is actually quite funny! Where's the rest I want to see more!

It's a really good story. Update it please!

Huh. Out of nowhere, Ash just suddenly thinks he might be adopted. Then, also out of nowhere, Ash is sucked into the world of Harry Potter, violating canon left and right.
And the only thing you do with the idea is use Ash's pokemon to beat up characters you don't like. How mature. You've made Ash into a Marty Stu.

Hey, i cant wait 2 see how this ends! GO ASH X JUNE!

UPDATE SOON!

Interesting idea. I can't wait to see where you go with this. Are any other Pokemon characters going to show up? If there was a balance where one person is traded for another between worlds then who was traded when Ash and Gary showed up in the Harry Potter world? Please update again as soon as possible.

Good story! I like it! Keep up the great work!