 Many_Persons 2005-10-10 . chapter 1 One thing; I advise not putting your story in script format,
it is very confusing, and makes for a difficult read.
(btw, I only really ever put critism in my reviews)
Also. Dumbledoor seems to be utterly out of character,
espically with the use of the word 'ya.' |
 Stinson 2005-06-11 . chapter 1 omg, I love that song! I haven't heard it in forever though. but I was "singing" right along with it. keep up the good work! |
 GB not 2004-10-25 . chapter 1 I'm going to have this stuck in my head all day! JC rules! |
 kim 2004-02-25 . chapter 1 that was so awesome girl! very good and i had the song playing in my head while i read it...that must of taken awhile.
another awesome story from KATHY! i wish more ppl could enjoy it **sniffle**
your one of the funnier ppl on FF.net
~Kim aka Nichole Anne Wood |
 AngelZash 2003-12-28 . chapter 1WEll, that was very interesting. Not exactly the HP style, but not bad really. Anyway, just letting you know, I'm one of those strange Jesus Freaks as well. ;-> |