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| crnflkgal 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseI like it...Sarah denying everything...very good move on your part. It is kind of funny, usually everyone makes her insane yet here you pin her as the one who calls the shots...I really liked this one |
| LadyGrey1174 2005-05-20 ch 1, | abuseO, sounds promising...can't wait... |
| Me Myself and I and Us and 2005-05-16 ch 1, | abuseA different twist to the story I would say, but it definately leaves room for a great number of possibilities. Continuation would be greatly appereciated. PLEASE! *gets down on her hands and knees and starts begging* Pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease! Thank you write again. |
| Dreaming One 2005-02-23 ch 1, | abuseYeah, I've always figured Sarah would eventually begin to doubt her sanity and the legitimacy of her visit to the Labyrinth, too. I like this concept. It makes sense that Sarah would end up becoming a shrink after what she experienced, lol, and it makes sense that eventually she'd find somebody driven nuts by a similar experience. Very cool. I doubt that another shrink would jump to the conclusion that the Labyrinth is real, though, no matter how many patients described it. They haven't started thinking alien abductions are real, after all, and tons of people describe similar experiences with those. But, yes...that's where suspension of disbelief comes into play. It's not as if fanfiction is ever terribly realistic, especially in THIS fandom. lol. I enjoyed this ficcy! Keep Writing! ~May |
| Indigo Spirit 2004-09-23 ch 1, | abuseI really like this very nice. |
| Ellie101 2004-01-04 ch 1, | abuseVerry nice. =) I loved it and I hope that you have plans of finishing it... but if you don't I think it was a great place to end it. I'll just have to be satisfied with filling in the gaps with my OWN imagination! Lovely bit of work.. thanks for sharing! |
| PeachDreamer 2003-12-26 ch 1, | abuseYet another wonderful story unfolding written by the marvelous alorin danya. You know what I'm really intrigued about... why Sarah's last name isn't Williams, but Decoursey, Interesting... She must have gotten herself married? Perhaps divorced then, so she can be with our dear Goblin King later in the story. Hum the possibilities that can come out of your genius mind are eagerly awaited upon. |
| Dawnatella 2003-12-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is so sweet. What a good Christmas treat.(-: |