Before I continue reading, I noticed a few errors in your story.

Kayko Keisha-> Keiko's last name is Ukimura, also you can spell it either of those ways (the way you spelled it, or the way I spelled it) Kayko is just the english way of saying it, Keiko is the japanese way.

Kuwabara's first name is spelled Kazuma.

Kewl story. very mysterious. why am i typing in little sentices. oh well. love the story. plz continue/update VERY soon. :P BAI!

xoxoxoxo -Lyn Lyn

Hey great chapter! I LOVED IT!^^ Um hey. Is the next chapter for continue of life going to be send to my email address? I want to read the next part so badly! Um 7th chapter is up on Everything ,but normal. GOING TO GO READ THE REST OF THRE STORY!

HI! i'm the author of the story u read called a real bout high, and THE Real bout high SEQUAL IS GONNA B POSTED 2 DAY!
Love Cammy

I liked it, not to many typed mistakes, i only read the first chapter i read the other a bit later.

I think that the story is good so far. I would like a little more background information about the main character. For example why when she said hell blast it made a wormhole??

Cool! I wish I had wings... great chapter! can't wait for an update! ^_^

Keep up the great work! ^_^ I like Kiara, she's cool.

I LIke IT!!