I expect that the offer to continue this has expired over the past few years, but this does stand beautifully by itself. I never had thought before of the untold facets that are of course there in the end of PS, but I don't have to wonder about them because you have captured them so perfectly. It is so refreshing as well to see Dumbledore almost too late because of a “sentimental” desire to fly. Everyone nowadays is so suspect of his behaviour in canon, especially PS, so ready to accuse him of callous manipulation, that I enjoyed this carefree portrayal of him. I’m not saying that there aren’t unanswered questions about his decisions, including the fact that he chose to fly to the Ministry when there are many faster ways to get there, but maybe it was all just an unfortunate confluence of innocent events.

I only wish I had been there to review sooner and attempt to urge you to write more about the six days unconscious.

lol nice

Wow! What a fantastic story! I personally think you wrote the characters very well. Your writing flows smoothly and is easy to read, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

The maudlin you is good. I've never really thought about thi bit in Philosopher's Stone, but you bring it to life pretty well. How about a little more physical desciption? Just a little for background noise, so to speak.

Why don't you reunite Sirius/Harry sooner? Have it go not by the book, it would work. Have Pettigrew (Wormtail) step into the picture before Sorcerer's Stone is destroyed, to try to take it back for his master, and gets caught in the process, therefore freeing Sirius, and this is all before Harry wakes up, and he starts to die, but doesn't Madame Promfrey does a manual reccussitation, like in your other story.
This would be cool! At least let him have a father figure when he wakes up. Let him know someone cares, if it is Snape, have him go back to Dursley's and get beaten, Snape rescues him. unless you don't like this sort of thing. It would be nice for you to write more on this please, I really don't care what, if you use my ideas, its ok. I want you to, but you don't have to, create your own if you can, I want to hear more!~!

That was very good & well written. The ending was very cute with Dumbledore ruffling his hair and all. Thank you for filling that gap in the 1st book very nicely. :)

Well, after having to open this story three times before I actually got to finish it, I shall say: very impressive! I've always wondered the exact circumstances in which Dumbledore discovered Harry was in trouble, now that little gap is filled. Congrats!

I love it! This was great. The perfect fit. The missing piece of the puzzle.