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sielge 2005-05-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis was a wonderful story that show the beautiful and strong friendship between Aragorn and Legolas...
lindahoyland 2004-06-10 ch 1,	abuseA very moving story with good psychology as Aragorn will need his friends more than ever now he is king.I've added you to my favourites list
tzncz 2004-03-23 ch 1,	abuseJust came back from China... and school's started... and then I find that you've written a whole new story plus nine chapters of another new story! Gosh, who's been a busy bee? This story is really sweet. Short, but sweet. Keep writing!
SerpentinexAngel 2004-02-20 ch 1,	abuseCan I just kill you anways?
Faerfaen 2003-12-28 ch 1,	abusewhew you had me worried that he was actually going to go!! great story.. or is this just a chapter? I hope just a chapter! =O) ~ Dy ~
Nenya 2003-12-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseAW! That was a great fic. Do you plan on continuing?? RotK 3 times? wow I just saw it twice. At the part where Legolas jumped off the boat I started sobbing and all my movie-fan friends couldn't figure out why. I had to explain it to them sigh The first time he looked upon the sea was enough to make me start bawling in the movie theatre. OMG! With the headpiece I got the chills! He is so sexy! And his little smile when Aragorn says 'Hannon le' SO CUTE! AAHH! I was very disappointed tho, he only said 9 separate lines, and twice he was counting orcs and once he just said 'a diversion' Gr. Oh well I think that was like one of the best movies anyway, I cried the last hour and 45 minutes of the movie and I spent the entire next day at school trying to track down someone with Visine because my eyes were so dry. Lol. But wow this story was really really good. I LOVED it. Wow. You know what, I have searched ALL over the internet to find a pic of my Leggy in his tiara but I cant find it, have you seen one? I want to make it my wallpaper ^_^ Wait, maybe I shouldnt--Mithfalas would be jealous Legolas rolls eyes Hm well anyhoo, good luck w/ the heart of the matter, see ya in chapter one! I want you ALL to remember this as the day Elenillor almost made Nenya Elerrina cry in one of her fics!
Arayelle Lynn 2003-12-28 ch 1,	abuseExcellent story. It almost makes me cry seeing that Legolas was leaving (and I actually cheered when he decided not to, yet) I'm sure there are more adventures after Aragorn's coronation. I mean, they have years together, right? I think its safe to say that most people thought Legolas look ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS with the headpiece. I heard uncountable sighs around the theatre! I confess, I watched the movie three times just so that I could see him wearing that headpiece (and planning to see more) Crazy thing to do, eh? Good luck with the new story. I'll be keeping my eyes on that.
lulu bell 2003-12-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseLOL! like the 'someone who won't get u enslaved' part. that is funny! hmm. isn't aragorn always the one saying legolas down't have to be so sarcastic? little sad, it does mean things have begung to change between them. legolas seems to be more somber than before, kinda sad. gimili never understand anything! LOL! so sad, the two thinking about leaving. the two are inseperable. been with each other through everything (and more to come when u start writng more stories! LOL), closer than freinds,- u described their relationship perfectly! LOL! a slave for gondor? no way! we were thinking more of rohan than gondor! it's too far away! and besides, i like faramir! (he's in gondor). lOL! they never liked being reminded of their royalty, do they? hope what arwen thought is true. that it is just the beginning. can't imaginre the end to ur stories. (though u probably are!) sory i have been writng shorter words for everything. i've been on im for a while, and it took me a while to get used to writeing things shorter, now it's hard to write regular! YAY! i have seen RotK 2!! though my freind got to see it 3! grr! am mad at him! (his cousin thinks he's crazy for seeing it that many times [he did it in 1 week! grr]) first time i saw it was the 19 with my friend. i met this guy that i sat next to and we are both obsessed and rad the books (or some of them in my case) while my freind had no clue about what we were talking abotu so she got kinda annoyed. but he is a friend of some guys who go to my shcool. ( weird fact. i talked to him for about 15 minutes total, and don't know alot about him. he asked his frined who goes to my school to invite me to his b-day party [he talked about it to me, but no details or the fact it was his b-day]. he invited me and the only reason my freind whose seen the movie 3 times got to go see it was because he was there when he asked me. well, i ended up not able to go to the actual party cuz my sis din't have time to drop me off, then finsh packing to go visit her mom, get ready for work, then take my brothers back to the movie. [the party was a LOTR party where u dressed up. i was a random ranger, the guy who invited me was frodo, my friend was peter jackson though he didn't rally dress up, and the other guy was aragorn- which he looked alot alike him, there was also a gandlaf, gondor soldeir, nd another guy from my school was sam -if he was the sam in the movie, we would all be in BIG trouble] so iwas going to get my ticket from them at the movie. i felt guilty that i only showed op for the movie. during the movie 'peter j' and 'aragorn' sat nex to me [no legolas! :'-( ]. later, me friend e-amiled me and told me the reaon he was invited, and that 'aragorn' had asked 'frodo' to invite me and sat next to me becuase he had a crush on me [that'd all i know]) sorry, but that just kinda disturbs me. i thkn that guy is the only guy (that i know of at least) that has a crush on me. and i still don't even really kno him! (sry agin, had to vent, it's been bothering me) grr! i'm going to make this one a long one even if i die trying! LOL! hey it's okay if ur replies r short. it's not like ur on a contract to make them long? right? only injury i had recieved is when we went skiing (for my 2 time) on sat. we didn't use poles (never learned how to), and my brother fell on this steep one, and i had to help him down the rest of the way and carry my skiis which kinda heurt my arms for a long time (sad fact: reason we don't go skiing [my first time was for a feild trip at school] is becuase my had frostbites, and now has ranoids [worst for of forstbites, well not actually form, just about 10 times as bad, if get any worse have to move somewhere else- did i already say thgis??], and my dad has no ligiment in his leg, so if he fell, he would have to get his leg removed, and he wouldn't be able to turn) ur friedn bit u? would like to know more and hey, it would make ur reply a long one! LOL! but u don't have to. that's nice. glad u have it all figured out. my eldest sister should be hear for new years, my next around january 7. really vute. on the 21, we were over at my grandparents. my younger cousin who is 5 1/2, asked me if i knew what the biggest present of all was. i said no, and asked what. she answere "jesus. becuase we all have to go to heaven when we're dead" how cute is that? but she forgot my name and called me missus the whole day even after i told her my name (though i think she was just joking later on0. but she made this picture of a heart with different lines of color all around it. she asked me how to spell my name, then wrote it on the back (it took three lines to fit it all). then she gave it to. i made a picture with the words princess claire on it for her. then i drew the LotR people and symbols. well, i got to go. my bvrother's watching x2 for the zillionth time even though it's mine. i got the tt ee, lotr the tt board game, fotr video game, and ROTk poster of aragorn (there weren't any legolas ones. u stole them all! LOL). how was ur holiday? it's ok u don't want to say which state. hmm. good rain ahower? did u get it? we didn't have snow either. well i really got to go clean up my room. am going to peter pan with dad and bros (not sure about my 2younger bro). p.s. my sister got a oink fuzzy phone and put it in our room! it's going to kill me! ti has the most obnoxious rign ever! ggrr!! well, i got to go. and i hope this is long enough for u. p.s.s YAY! my dad got to stay home until 10:30 cuz another docter took his place. and my uncle and his girlfriend took my sibs and me to cheaprer by the dozen (that movie makes my family of 8 seem small).
Blume 2003-12-26 ch 1,	abuseWhats' this? two responses to Das Blume? sarcasm mode great, now I will have to create a hunting party and go kill that other 'Das Blume'... lol! ok. I'm better now. "My King" oh yeah...it sounds sweet but admit it sounds impersonal so what's the story? talkign abotu fathers, I foudn a nice fic named...er... forgot the name btu CelticBard is writtign it, she's good at writting evil/notreallyevil/shorttempered Thranduils! ;P Yeah, one day that will happen and all we strive for will be acomplished, there will be peace among nations and we will finally discover a way to travel to Valinor, where we will randomlu kidnap elves from here and there and make them pose for us so hopefully you will get enough inspiration to finish all your series ^^! ... but right now I'm more worried about my page, in which I havent' made an update for a whole year if no more... problem is I forgot my password! I never forget those things! I have like 4 email accounts and like 6 web accounts and at least another 6 for other stuff and I never forget them! but this one...oh dear, I want to beat my brain so badly right now... XP but talking about happier times, didn't I say it!? the crown-thingy is gorgeous! and we could see he braided his hair in another fashion!(would that one be his "I-am-your-prince-bow-to-me" braid? ^_~) She's creppy! I bet she spied people with her magic plate! "mirror, mirror on the wall, show me Aragorn's butt" (ok, bad poetry I admit...) have to go... kinda hope I wrote the password somewhere in my other PC (I really REALLY hope so...)
Syrinx Flute 2003-12-26 ch 1,	abuseaww, i hope youre going to continue! i dont like slash so I was so glad this isnt! I love Aragorn/Legolas friendship fics tho! i really hope you continue it! yay!
Catmint 2003-12-26 ch 1,	abuseExcellent stuff!!
kendrawriter 2003-12-26 ch 1,	abusehm...well. i really want to write a LOTR:ROTK fanfic, but cruising around here, i think i'd better post mine in the movie section. i haven't read the books yet, and just reading your one chapter i've already spotted tons of things i'd be missing if i tried to write one and post it here. so, this was a great learning experience, (i should go perchase the books NOW. and i will;) and nicely written. i'm going to continue to read here, just to see what i'm in for, but i can already tell there's alot to take in. oh by the way, i've seen return of the king three times, as well!!
Deana 2003-12-26 ch 1,	abuseThat was so sweet! :) I'm so glad that Legolas stayed until after Aragorn's death; I can't bear to read the Valinor stories...I literally skip those, LOL! Girl, I can't wait for 'Heart of the Matter'! I'm counting the days until it comes! :)
Andraste Emeraldpetal 2003-12-26 ch 1,	abuseAww^_^ Great story, mellon nin. I love it!
OutOfTheBox 2003-12-26 ch 1,	abuseo cute! more!

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