eh sure (throws cookies)it might be a bit stale

so are you going to finish this story, cause its a good story:)

I really hope you update but even if you do not I have to admit this story amazes me and if you knew me almost nothing amazes me. Most of the people who write stories here and unrealistic, but this is really realistic.

Great Start! There Naruto goes again, defending that girl even when she acts like a... well we all know what she acts like before Shipuuden. :)

ARRGH! Damn it, I think that you have writers block! Either that or you're really dead! Please UPDATE! This is the story that made me interested in

PLEASE UPDATE!

Heh. Actually, Naruto likely has some of the best stealth in the series. He routinely evaded ANBU patrols before he was a genin, and he was good enough to paint the Hokage Mountain in broad daylight without getting caught until he was finished.
Furthermore, none of the ubertrackers could find him after he stole the scroll. That takes skill.

Dude, everything is great and all, but you got the Ramen place wrong. Its called Ichiraku's ramen. And the girl is Ayame and the old man is... the old man. At least that's what Naruto calls him. You should fix that on the next update.

aw cute Naruto/Sakura moment! :) :) :) :) Please let it be Naruto/Sakura!

i liked this story
but i really really hope naruto gets Hinata cuz well
Their so cute together
becuase Hinata has liked him since she knew him
and Sakura is starting to like him only because
Sasuke isint there but what happens when she sees him again??

PLEASE LET IT BE NARUTO AND HINATA!

OK, look. U r annoying the hell out of me right now. How could u start the best story iv ever read, and just came to a stop for no reason? Not only that, but its been two years since ur last update. But when i look on ur profile, all of your other stories have been updated in the past week or so. Please, from a loyal fan, please, i beg of you, please, if u dont ill start to cut myself at night, and cry myself to sleep...so please, for the love of everything decent, and true, UPDATE!(please!)

no you did not earn a cookie!

very good, please update soon, and please Narusaku.

::falls out of chair laughing::
A pig! A PIG! That is good! I love it!
This fic is really something! I like it a lot! I vote for NaruTem, and could there maybe be a little GaaHina on the side? I haven't read much of that pairing, but it's cute.

update soon

What an amazing story so far! After the last two chapters, I have come to realize how rare a story this is. You've come up with some of the BEST characterizations I've seen for ALL the characters. The POV swaps you use are extremely difficult to pull off, yet you do it flawlessly and in a way that isn't annoying. The interactions between the characters and the individual personalities you've given them are top notch and the plot NEVER slows down. Keep this up. Its great!