That was so cute...

Specially how you amde both trunks being there...

I love this story!! Very funny!! LOL!!

You are truly a gifted writer. I loved every word of it; even the part about Bulma getting fried. lol. Great story and Great job.

Lol, that was very cute!

Well done!

^_^

aw that was so good! i loved it! thanks for a really good read! ew tutti fruity ice cream and pickles and cheetoes... yeck...
i'll have to ask my cousin if her boyfr panicked; i'll have to let you know lol i know my boyfr probably would! her little girl is now four months old, so cute!
anyways good work! this was really good!
if you ever want... dont mean to advertise... perhaps you could... maybe look at some of my dbz fanfics... maybe...
anyways must go phone is going off!
oh and i'll say it again! GREAT WORK!

SURFS UP!

Haha, best fake ending ever. Great story anyways, though cheetos with ice cream isn't that bad, kinda tasty ^_^

OMG!! That was hilarious! I can't believe how hard I laughed during that chapter! And the ending was just unbelievable! I love the fic. It's definately one of my favorite DBZ fics for a BV get together.

that was funny! I loved it! Though when you fried Bulma I was a little concerned...but it was good.

Very funny! Nice work.

I like it a lot! LoL! Vegeta going into a panic and fainting?! HaHa! Didn't see that one coming!

I loved it! but, why do you hate bulma? sure... I wish vegeta was single too but- did I just say that?! *bangs head on table* anyway, great story.

hahahahahah it was hilarious, dude! I laughed so hard, especially when Vegeta panicked and fainted *guffaw* Nice!

Lmao...Never in any fanfic have I seen the "mighty saiya-jin prince" get so panicky! It was great stuff! I cant tell you how great this story is! lol, lucky i got tired of gaia-online and decided to come read some fics ^^ or i would have never found it! Hehe you've gotten my mind stuck on fanfiction again, I think i'll get to work on my own long since updated stories ^_^; now mayeb i can get out a chapter or two

Lol!! that was funny! and ina panic Vegeta blasted Bulma! Oh god that was perfect! I liked the real ending too though! Any part of the combination makes her sick! haha :)

that was awsome! seriously!
And as for the fake ending-I would've killed you.
No joke.
but it was funny.
In a dark, crazy kind of way.