need to continue the story with Hailey and Cougar. but not need to take long with Harm and Mac though

its a good story but i think it can have more to it with Hailey being the first female CAG

hehe, cool. i like it.
i've read a few jag fics now that mention harm running off to 'nam when he was a teenager, jag is my favorite tv show and i dont remember anything about that. do you know what eppisode that was in if that was from the tv series? i would appreciate it. thnx.

great story.

Love the way Webb played the role here to got both harm and hailey to the hospital. It is a wonderful ending.

Very good! Gunny is probably a little old for Hailey though, but you could use that as a plot point at some time.

WHOO-HOO! Ok your version is way sexier than TPTB. I like it, I love it, I want some more of it. :)

Cute...I love what you got keep up the good work:)

Hey. I cannot remember if I sent in a review for this story, but oh well. I think this story's great an by all means please continue. I love your style of writting. You give these characters such fun yet intense situations. Awesome. Please keep writting!

I like the whole idea about Hailey and Victor, but I don't think he is as young as you think. I believe he is in his 30's or close to 40. He's been in the Marines for almost 20 years I think. I'm not real sure on this though. Good luck with the rest.
NavyCB

great story!

I love your story!! I loved the part about making Hailey a big sister before making Harm a Grandfather. I can not wait until you post the next chapter

Fabulous. I love the story. Very creative. It is really fin to imagine and read. Pretty please keep going!

Very nice. I like. Hope we get more.

Things move a little fast here, but I love it. The developement between Hailey and Vic surprised me :-)