What Is up my ninja!? This story is good because it helps me further understand the whole rahxephon story, im glad someone wrote about it. Good Job keep it up!

Excelent Story.

Nice job...

I need to watch Rahxephon again..

Nice way to finish it of. You can tell she is waiting in anticipation throughout the whole story. But at the end it's pretty easy to make out that she's still got that 'not graduated into a woman' yet feeling when it comes to Ayato. LOL Great stuff, I've gotten the RahXephon OAV and I'll be watching that tommorrow. I can't wait! ^_^ I'll let you know if there are any new details about Haruka and Ayato...though I wouldn't dare spoil any of it for you! ^_^

It is still going well. ^_^ Always I am impressed with how you capture the characters attitudes. Itsukis envy of Harukas love for Ayato who is stuck inside Tokyo Jupiter. And also Megumis not so easy to come out and say what she feels. Keep up the wonderful job. I really do love reading your fics. ^_^

Great stuff yet again. ^_^ It has the feel of some of your previous fics, as I stated before. You keep to the mannerisms and attitudes of the characters very well. It's easy to picture your fics as part of the anime itself. There's not much I can say in reference to make it BETTER. Just keep it up ^_^
Also: I've recently obtained the RahXephon OAV which has more of a focus on Ayatos and Harukas relationship. And Also I am still working on my fic. :)