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Holy **!
Wow. I can't say much, except for the fact that you are a very dedicated writer!
I love it. Its very well written. Keep it up! (only read to about the 6th one)

Holy mother of crap. Over a hundred chapters?

Sweet Jesus.

In any event, this is really weird, though decently enjoyable. It definitely needs to be re-formatted so that dialogue breaks into paragraphs by each speaker. Do that, and it will become more readable and more accessible to the casual passerby.

THWOOM.

You really need to re-format this story.

Keiman:

good story, but you need to cut down on the caffiene!

Well, they'd better not by Miaka and Yui! My god, man, how the heck can you keep up with the dialog for so many characters. My head would explode.
Faye winning at the races... finally!
Regards.
W.

Hey. Welcome back. Thought you might have been called into service or something. Anyway, I haven't been following other fics as much lately as I've been working on my own, but I'll say, this story is mind-boggling. Anybody who can put references to Megadeth and Mitch Miller in one story has certainly got the creative spark going. My only nit is that the formatting of some of the earlier chapters had an extra line between two spaces of text, making it a bit harder to read. Other than that, thanks (or, I should say, arrigato) for the translations - I've learned more Japanese from reading your fic than any other single source, I think.
Regards.
W.

good

Great treatment of Kei/Kome 1 & 2. They've both got so much baggage you could keep this going through the whole story. Not sure about the animosity between Yuri and Kei, though. By mission 3 (Flash version) you may recall they had become quite chummy, taking vacations together (Pink Sniper), sleeping (only literally) together (Winners in Summer Colors), etc. Hope to hear more about why and how that friendship cooled.
M.

This just keeps getting better all the time!
I really like the increased use of Japanese terms. I am learning without realizing it!
Next,you will bring Classic Kei and Yuri in from the past! Instead of the unholy 4, it will be the Insane 6!
Can hardly wait for chapter6,7,8, etc.

The addition of Dr WHO. Nice touch! Time travel!I thought he traveled in a telephone booth, though. Must have missed some episodes. Also, my version of Dr WHO was Tom Baker and I don't remember him in a Trilby and purple coat. Oh well, memory is the second thing to go!
Like the twists and turns and Spike sounds like a character from yet another anime series. You are inspiring me to write my version of the Dirty Pair meet the Terrible Three or Nasty Trio.
I may not insert characters from other animes yet, but I think it will work OK. Stay tuned.

Nicely done with the chiefs! What is "Kami" anyway. I have a good idea what "Shimatta" is!
Is Gomen, "Excuse me"?
Having the chiefs along on a mission is a new touch but useful. Haven't seen it since the climax of the Siren incident in DP Flash Mission 1 or with Poproro in "Gray Avenger" in DPF Mission 3.
More animosity between Kei and Yuri than usual, but good for dramatic tension. Never thought of bringing in "Transformers"! I thought Self Aware AIs were not in the lingo of the Dirty Pair. Interesting.

Congrats for taking the plunge- the second chapter is much better than the first - a little tough to digest the shotgun blast character intros in ch. 1 - your pacing also gets better, and some of your ideas are a gas! Dirty Pair to Unholy Four is quite comical. Hope the trend continues in chapter 3.
Here's hoping for at least one Kome vs. Kei showdown (Think Lee Van Cleef vs. Cline Eastwood in "The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly") - not to the death, of course, but you've got to admit it's hard to find two hotter-headed red heads in the anime world - there are many of us out here who would love to see how that develops...
Again, congrats on jumping into the pool - I'm sure you've given more than a few others the inspiration to express their creativity.
M.

you need to fix this, it is unreadable with the spacing messed up

digi-girl: I think i am starting to understand this more! Hurray for me!
Y.C.(in case your wondering it's short for Yami Christina): she's lost it hasn't she?
Pharaoh: Yep, but we've know that for a while.
Y.C.: True, well i think it's time for the frying pan.
digi-girl: frying pan?!? No! not the frying pan!
Y.C.: sorry hikari, but it's for your own good.*hefts her 'big black frying pan of doom' and get's ready to hit her hikari with it*
digi-girl:*flees from the wrath of her demented Yami* keep that frying pan away from me!
Y.C.:*sweatdrop* come of Pharaoh, lets go get her. *follow digi-girl to where ever she took of to*
Random Sign: Hi! I'm a random sign fron the Random sign company! digi-girl hired me while on the run to finish her review, boy i love this girl, she's putting my kids through school, wanna see a picture of one? here look. *shows a picture of a flier* isn't she adorable? well anyways, digi-girl wishes to inform you she enjoyed the chapter and can't wait for the next one so she can learn more about Dirty Pair, well as much as she can, knowing her she hit the fan sites sone for info. so, uh, ya. Now to go collect my pay! 1/10 of a cent for every word! i get paid top cent at work, i'm making a fortune compared to some other signs!
~sorry about all the rambeling, i couldn't help it, i tend to do that alot~