As English isn't your first language, I just wanted to tell you that I think you did an impressive job with vocabulary and grammar in this story.

I always like to see Jarod and Parker working together, and I enjoyed reading the story you have created of them doing so.

I really love this story! Very good ideas turned into something great (sorry very bad English :) ) You are an excellent writer!

Hi

I just read your story it was great. I can't wait to read the sequel.

Hu...

Finished... I'm not sure if I should laugh or cry... of course it's a Happy End, but the anyway, now it's over... ):

I'm really looking forward to the sequell,

GREAT STORY!

Carestel

“Shut up, get back to the Centre and catch me if you can”

*lol*

Thats great!

No time to write much, cause I HAVE to go on ...

Wow, I just spent the last couple of hours reading this entire story. This is just wow. It has to be one of the best Pretender fics I've read yet. I look forward to reading the sequal )

Like the stunt. I know that the FBI uses like 10 different cars and switch off so that you don't always see the same car in your rearview mirror. Tricky those G-men!

LOve and peace

Wow! You are just amazing as always. You have such a natural gift for writing, it just seems to flow out of you without even trying. What an amazing adventure this story has been! I can't believe that it is over! I was about in tears realizing that it was all over, but I'm so glad that there is going to be a sequel. You can rest assure that I will be here waiting as patiently as I can for the next story to start the new journey. I will say that you are the reigning queen for the most evil of cliffhangers that I've wanted to wring your neck more times than I can count, but I loved every minute of it. Keep em wanting more. I've cried, been angry, the action was amazing. I can just imagine this story playing out on screen as a movie. AS for this chapter. I'm so glad that everyone made it home safely, that parker and J together, the centre is gone! I can't wait to see the new transformation of the centre take place with them at the helm. Every part of this story was amazing! If I was to write all the great parts, it would take forever and be the whole story. Parker was soo adorable with her little brother. I can't wait to see how that story plays out as well and to see them become a family, especially since everyone is there and parker and Jarod have their families with them. And last but not least. Thank you for all your kind words back to me on the chapters and the special thanks! ) You deserve all the praise...Your stories and updates are always one of the highlights of my days. Can't wait for more. Excellent job! This story had it all!

Aw shucks! My last review. I loved it. You did a great job. Why didn't you give the boy a name! :o) I'll be watching for more stories from you. You have a lot of talent. Keep it up.

So much to say and so little time. Where do I start? How about at the beginning? "Agency bandages in their pockets..." I think you may have meant badges eh? Bandages cover wounds, badges show who they are. As for the whipped scream from Lyle, I have no idea what to say to that! :o) Not sure what you were trying to say. I'll just leave it at that. Don't need to give you a page. :o) Yes, I liked this chapter. I completely forgot about the other Parker child. Good job bringing him in.

Hi, your story is really great, I'm looking forward the sequel.

See Ya

Chibi

Well, well. This is the end? Now, that was quite a journey! You constantly left us in suspense, added a little romance ;), and loaded it with plenty of action! This story had everything and I'm sure the sequel will be more of the same! I love the family image at the end. Nice touch. Looking forward to the sequel!

e-dog

I am so glad to hear there is a sequel for this story. I will love watching them become a family. This was a great story, and I am so glad I found it. Thanks you for the acknowledgement of my reviews, and the wonderful way to spend some of me free time. Good job.

Hi ICD,

That was a wonderful ending to your story or a begining to your upcoming sequel. I have really enjoyed your story. It had a little of everything. Action, Romance,suspense. You did an outstanding job and I'm anxiously awaiting your next story. So get busy.

Take care,

Mercy

I didn't mean to get so behind in this story, but I finally caught up. Loved this past chapter. The emotions were all very real and lived up to the potential I knew this story had. Great job!

e-dog