|Reviews for Turn Of The New Leaf|
| miikochan 12/30/03 . chapter 3
O_0; eek! *shudders* What a freaky old hag! Teas disguise must be pretty good to fool an old bat!
Evil Cliffies! Wonder who the guy is?
| Lynderia 12/29/03 . chapter 2
I'm interesting in finding out how Tea will interact with the guys at her new school. What will her new name be? Please continue; you're doing a good job! _
| Saiouri 12/29/03 . chapter 3
Good chapter! Is the guy.. Seto? Jou? Bakura? Who? I really hope it's Seto.. Or perhaps he is in one (or more) of her classes..
That hag was really funny, though. And scary; very scary. So was her evil glint.. Tea may have a stalker.. o.O
I have an idea, btw. Why not let Tea join a club or something? And let one of the guys be in the same club too.. or something like that. Perhaps an odd romance will develop.
If it's her with Seto, though.. Imagine him thinking.. "I'm not gay. I'm not gay.." *roars with laughter and falls off her chair*
A-HEM. Sorry; I'm not usually like this. Just extra hyper today.
Well, update soon.
| miikochan 12/29/03 . chapter 2
I likey! Please update soon!
| blahblahblah 12/29/03 . chapter 2
Nice. If Tea didn't meet Joey, does that mean she didn't meet Yugi, Yami, Bakura, Yami Bakura, Marik, Yami Marik, Tristan, and Duke? Update soon
| Mystical Miyuki 12/29/03 . chapter 2
Miyuki: this is pretty good so far, continue!
| Saiouri 12/28/03 . chapter 2
Hmm... this chapter's better and longer, I did a word count: the chapter's like 1265 words! Wow, that's good!
Like the reason you chose for Tea's decision to go to the boys' school. I bet this is going to be even more interesting once she reaches school.. You might want to check out other fics like yours.. This idea's been done in the Inuyasha's section many times.. I really like Clara's "School Daze", it's an Inuyasha/Kagome fic in which Kagome attends an all-boy school. You can check it out if you want, it's in my favorites. Currently number 24..
Maybe you'll get some ideas.
| Saiouri 12/27/03 . chapter 1
I just read my review.. I'm sorry. I didn't mean ten to twenty words each chapter, I meant a thousand to two thousand. I don't know why keeps taking off all those zeroes! They did it in another review of mine too!
| hiaohisoihxouhpjhpih 12/27/03 . chapter 1
hehee... thx 4 reviewing ma story. _ lol. tea's gonna dress as a boi. i wonder who will reveal Tea's indentity. _ NEway, update soon!
| Eternal-Hampsters-of-Doom 12/27/03 . chapter 1
cool so far
| belle-fille1 12/27/03 . chapter 1
Oh this is just great! I love this idea, I've seen this theme floatin' around Inuyasha and DBZ fanfics but I haven't found one in the Yu-gi-oh! section! Yayayayaya! Better update soon, I'll be waiting!
| Saiouri 12/26/03 . chapter 1
Interesting idea.. Although the chapter was very short. Try writing some more. I try to get my chapters atleast 10-20 words long, but I guess that's a bit high. Well, try writing atleast 500-700 words per chapter, but don't rush times and events, take the time to explain them in a bit more detail. You might want to try make the chapters even longer as the story progresses. Like in this chapter, you simply described how she looked- you could've added the reason why she was in the situation in the first place, a little explanation...
Sorry I'm being so picky, but I am trying to help you.
By the way, is she walking to the train station? Cause as far as I know, the nearest train station to me is a one hour drive away. Obviously, Tea would have to be living right near it or something.. And I don't think that there is a train ststion in Domino.. Wait a minute, never mind. This is an AU (Alternate Universe) fic, right?
Well, continue. Don't worry, cause i'll stick with you the whole way through.
| Devon.good bye everyone 12/26/03 . chapter 1
Anzu a Boy? I can see it please update
| Nine of Swords 12/26/03 . chapter 1
AH! SAVE ME FROM THE FORMATTING ISSUES, MOMMY! Great idea. Poor execution. Poor logic.
| Jujubie 12/26/03 . chapter 1
Im my first reviewer! hahahahahaha...pretty pathetic...but I support myself 100% hehehe well good luck to ME! Peace out! vov