 Cassandra30 11/22/09 . chapter 1Excellent! I am not sure that Phineas loved Sirius in so much as he was the last of the Blacks. Now his Family Line is gone. |
 Reading4soul 8/13/06 . chapter 1Well, I'm not going to flame you. It's just that this is such a great plot-bunny with so many opportunities to explore - it could be great if you continued it... :) |
 jayda 6/9/05 . chapter 1 its me again
gez know im posotive that your a great writer. maby even a tad better than J.K Rowling herself. Yuo must know that i have been going to this site for a long time now to read what other people have wrote. But i never found anyone that can write a story like you can. your unbelivable. The story called "giving in" realy touched my heart. Some people may think that ot was selfish, but i only care about harrys happinness anyway. Oh by the was in your AN you said you may want to up another chapter, but i think you should leave it as it is. Then people can use there imagination to fill in the blanks.
write to you soon
Jayda |
 Arkeus 9/2/04 . chapter 1Is this solely in harry's mind, or...?
Interesting view by the way, but harry cannot decide for his parents: i understand he could make the choice of his parents over the world, but he knows his parents would fight, and he would lose them again, but this time he won't help anybody else. What else...ah, i am a partisaan of tentimesstrongerthanvoldemort!Dumbledore , so... |
 sami1010220 8/14/04 . chapter 1flame?FLAME? why would anyone want to FLAME this fic. it was great! you probably should at least think about trying to continue with the rest of the fic, that would be intresting. anyway, like i said, great job! |
 aradonai 8/10/04 . chapter 1This story isnt a bad start, in fact it's an excelent one. But won't Harry get lonely being the only person who remembers what truly happened? He'd never have anyone to confide in. Would'nt he miss the adventures that he had with Ron and Hermione? They wouldn't remember them. The scary part is that the only person who would actually know how Harry feels would be Voldemort. And yould this be a figment of Harry's imagination? Is Voldemort, in actuallity, attacking the wizard society while they panic about Harry's disappearance? lol sorry I was just in a questioning mood. It's a very great start! I would keep reading if you wrote more! |
 Kaydon 7/26/04 . chapter 1ah, I'd like to see another chapter about this, like mabey, Voldie breakes his promise and comes after him?
Kaydon |
 snickerdoodle10201 3/27/04 . chapter 1I personally think that this is a really interesting premise for a story. I hope you decide to continue with this one... |
 Shardsofaphoenix 3/4/04 . chapter 1Whoa, that's really cool/wierd in a...wierd sort of way. I make perfect sense, don't I? Hehe. Anyway, I LOVE THIS, but I'm not exactly expecting u to continue since you haven't since last year. I hope u do though! And if u continue, u can reach me at my email.
SW |
 soriblack 2/2/04 . chapter 1 simply amazing concept. You better get making with those chapters or youll get soom howlers very soon! |
 Jism 1/26/04 . chapter 1Ah yes...selfishness. Well let me say this: If everything turns out the way it's supposed to be then Harry hasn't changed the course of events much (except for the fact that he's got a family). So I suppose it wouldn't be that selfish since the War will happen anyway. |
 The Rogue Raven 1/10/04 . chapter 1AH! I don't know which to choose! Both are really good!
*Raven* |
 BlackNight 1/6/04 . chapter 1 OK, now i realy dont know what to tell you! this is a good fic too! i dont know what to deside, but i think you should write both of them |
 Porphyria 1/4/04 . chapter 1I thought this story was really good, and I think you should carry it on because I want to know why Voldemort did all this for Harry, what was his side of the bargain, surely he could still kill Voldemort, just once his parents had been brought back to life? |
 LAoR 12/30/03 . chapter 1Flame? Why in the world would anyone want to flame you? If they do I'll sick my Remmie on them! *grins* Remmie is mine...all mine. lol
Anyway, yeah, I have to agree that it was rather selfish of Harry to do that. But what would most of us have done? Harry is just proving that he's human and has needs and wants; after all, who has more right than anyone to need or want other than Harry? Exactly, no one. I'd love to see what else you have for us! I CAN'T WAIT!
Remmie is mine...all mine. lol
much love,
from LAoR |