Aw, fabulous. You say it's feeble, but I think this was well done. There were quite a few lines in this that made me laugh and want to quote them to people, and your writing got Jack's character and the spirit of the show across very well. Thank you for writing this. :)

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Oh, wow. This was such an awesome story. I know I'm only echoing the words of other reviewers, but I could totally see this as the plot/script for a Samurai Jack episode. I think that's because you really managed to capture the spirit of the show. Keep up the good work! =)

Also, just as an aside, I wanted to say that I think you really nailed the Scotsman's character. Nothing he did in this story felt out of place. Jack on other hand felt just a tad more cynical then in the show, but then again we never really did have a clear understanding of what went on inside his head at times. :P

Very nice! I especially liked the Labyrinth references. I though it was funny when Jack said: "I know this trick. Now tell me which door to go through or I will make a hole in you. And you're going through the door first." This would have made an excellent epp, I wish that Samurai Jack had had a Young Writers contest, and the winner would have gotten their story made into an episode. P.S., What's your favorite epsisode?

One word:

incredible!

A bit confusing, sure, but otherwise great. And extra kudos to you for conceiving a story with the beloved Scotsman! AYE!

wonderful! it'd make a great SJ movie. i loved the scene with the first fairy deception in particular (the ep you referenced was very touching). the way in which you described Jack falling under her spell, and then snapping back out of it was very well-written.
the only thing i had any trouble with was Pink; some of her lines seemed a bit OOC (although hysterical!). don't get me wrong - it was very little trouble at all. i really enjoyed this fic.

If this is "feeble" i'd love to see your other fics! Very witty...and you got the scotsman's accent down perfectly!

Wow. This is awesome- more like a deleted Samurai Jack episode than a fanfic. It was vivid, witty, creative, everything a good SJ episode is. ^_^ My only complaint would have to be that Jack is a little... sassier than his normal self. Other than that, this is a very lush, entertaining, and overall awesome piece of work. I'd like to see another one!

Well, that's pretty frelling weird. I wonder what happened to my formatting when I uploaded? It's a .txt, not a .doc... anyway, I'll try and fix it. Glad you liked it otherwise, sorry about the slight eye-melting effect you must have experienced.

Good writing, good detail, good characterization...
JUST SPACE MORE! T-T
You make a new paragraph when one person speaks, and then another one speaks immediately after, or when the subject matter changes. This will make your story FAR easier to read.
Other then that, this is great!