Nice. I liked it. Good job.

aw, that was so good. there's just something about Numair that everyone can understand, i think you depicted his personality perfectly!

This was simply breathtaking. I've read this a couple of times and keep coming back. Keep writing, you are amazing.

Short and sweet. Just who D/N fluff should be. But this wasn't quite fluff, still it was perfect.

This is so good! I love your writing, I really do. :)

i love your paragraph about the candle wax!its so descriptive and symbolic. bravo

Hello! Your story rocks! Add on soon! I havce to calm down 'cause i red all the Tamora Piecre book and totally loved them and then i found storys about it on the internet, SO IM FREAKING!

Aw, i love Numair! You should do more one shots like these, where the reader really gets an insight to what they're thinking and feeling. Awesome job! You could even go further with this if you wanted to!

This is wonderful! Exactly what I wanted! *dances around squealing madly*
Thank you, thank you, thank you -
Merry Christmas!
- Daff.

Lovely! I liked the candle; it's wonderful to find a D/N writer with some subtlty about their writing, who can do more than just plot and characters. Please write more, I am starved of good TP fics.

update!

That was good! I really liked it! I can't wait for some more! :)

Wow...just, wow...that was so awesome! I can't begin to describe how great I thought that was...Please do more D/N fics, cuz you are one of the best I've ever read! Also, update Ravenspeak! I LOVE THAT FIC! ^_^