Reviews for Together at last

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escape artists 2008-02-11 ch 1,	abuseyou know, if Annie took place in the thirties (and it did) then 20 years later it'd be 1953, and in the 1950's, they did not have e-mail, they didn't have cell phones either. plus they live in New York city, in this story it seems like they all live in the suburbs, like the fact that it hardly takes them any time at all to get to the hospital, think NYC traffic... and even if they all moved to some suburb... they must live pretty close because duffy just says "the local Life Center" yet they haven't seen each other... remember because Duffy wonders if they have children or are married...
cheetahtastic1983 2007-12-31 ch 2,	abuseThe movie took place in 1933.So 20 years later would be 1953, and they didnt have cell phones or e-mail.But it was a good story.
anon 2007-09-27 ch 2, anon.	abuseLove it and everyone has already pointed out that the technology thing and Sandy but what I want more of his how Annie met Brett and I want to know more about him.
Megan 2007-05-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseIs this Annie story supposed to be in modern times or something? Remember, the movie did come out in 1982 but it was set in 1933. If the reunion is based on the events in the movie happening in 1982, then e-mail and cell phones are possible, but not if it happened in 1933.
stonedangel 2007-05-25 ch 1,	abuseJust so you know, 20 years later was 1952 and they didn't have emails till the mid-90's.
taywrites 2007-03-31 ch 1,	abuseum i just wanted to let you know that...in 1953...there was no email...you would have to make it more like 60 years later for that to happen! not trying to be mean or anything...just thought you should know that little detail!
tji80 2006-11-19 ch 1,	abuseI really liked this story. I won't point out the computer/email/cell phone/dog stuff since other people pointed that out. Other than that, making it this day in age, it was really good. I liked that all the orphans were married and had kids. Very cute! Keep up the great work and I hope you do write more!
Jessica01 2006-11-07 ch 2,	abuseThings happen. I'm glad Ally was born safely.
THE annie 2006-01-23 ch 1, anon.	abusethis is very good i decided to red annie ff cuz 1. i love ff and 2. im annie in our school musical!! its so fun its just really hard cuz i have had a major crush on the boy whos now paying daddy warbucks since 6th grade but ya great story!
InuxKag4eva 2005-09-20 ch 1,	abusenice story. i liked it. i am going to see the broadway musical for the second time in my life tomorrow night. just a couple of notes though. the original story takes place in 1933 and you said this was taking place 20 years later that would make it 1953. e-mail hadn't been invented yet, let alone the home computer. the only computers in existence at that time were big giant machines. and another thing, dogs can't live for 20 years let alone 20+ years since annie originally found sandy before she even met daddy Warbucks. and unless i forgot anything, other than that, it's a good story.
xobeyouteefullox 2005-04-15 ch 1,	abusei didnt like it...u should have made there be some humor into it..!
Just Kate 2005-03-12 ch 1,	abuseErlack.. Much errors and Much rambling. I have a few suggestions: 1] The play "Annie" takes place in the 1933 calender year, so twenty years later would 1953, no email... 2] Would Pepper and Molly be so at piece with eachother?? 3] Give backround on how the other orphans got out of the orphange... 4] Having Snady alive wouldn't work, I've never heard of a dog that lives for twenty years...of course that would be assumming that Sandy was a meer puppy in the play... I don't think that's exactly how it was. 5]"Forty-five year old Drake was not far behind, and he smiled warmly at everyone." I think Drake was around 60 during the play...twenty years later...that's more like 80... And Finally, 6] Break the story up into two chapters... it's way to long for one... However, these are my suggestions and you don't have to take them.
LittleGloriaFaith 2004-11-20 ch 1,	abuseHey there!! My name is Sadira. How are you? Good i hope. I jsut read your "Annie" story and it was GREAT! It was so heartwarming and everything! Please write another lovely story like this soon!! You are a great writer. Maybe you could write one about Annie when she was younger and Molly first came to the orphanage? That would be cool! Sadira
Butterflly 2004-06-19 ch 1,	abuseThis is an ex-Cellent story I give it three thumbs up!
kitty weiss 2004-06-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseim too lazy to sign in. Well, it was kind of corny, but it was good.

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