keep it going

oh how I wish thats how it really ends! well a girl can dream cant she!great writing btw!

good but its not rory

very cute and heartwarming. keep writing :)

awesome
you should of mailed this to Amy with a petition that has millions of signatures on it, to air this episode instead of the one that aired.
i know i sound nuts but i hated that episode cause that was one of the roots that destroyed JessRory in my opionion.
anyways good story, are you going to continue it? if not thats cool

Hey! loved ur fic! i hope you continue it! u haved talent! good luck with it!

huh..wow "me" you talk alot of ** for somebody who never say anything.

aw! thats so great! i wish that the show would have been like that...w/ no dean interaction whatsoever!! i really liked the part w/ the ice n the soda can, and the dancing bears. lol that was so great! great job! i loved it! *sigh* y cant fanfiction really happen on the show? *sigh*...:-D

I raelly likd ur fanfic. u should keep on making new chapters.

The way Rory introduced the Chilton dance doesn't make any sense. You can't get an ice cube into a can. You can if it's small enough, but then the effect will be different.
A solution: you can empty the can, then a place a nylon bag inside of it, but keep its open side out of the can. Then you spill some water into the ba g, but not too much, just enough to make a decent size ice cube. Then you gently and slowly pull the part of the bag that is outside the can, until only the water-filled part of it is inside the can. Then you tie the bag in a small knot, close to the edge of the water-filled part, cut off any remaining useless nylon, and let the water filled tied up bag fall gently into the can.
Then when you put the can in the freezer and wait for a few hours you will have a can with a decent ice cube rolling in it.
The only problem is Rory wouldn't have thought all this up so far ahead, and that's why this story isn't realistic.
Actually, that is only one reason. Another reason is that it takes all the events that preceeded it in Season 3 and just ignores them in order to fix Rory and Jess' problems within the duration of an hour.

Great! now that how it should have happened!

ok i like that she got jess to talk to her but shes not spose to do it to jess!

Much better ending! Great job!

man i love this ending soo much more and the way rory tells jess about the chiltin dance. please keep putting more chapters i know it was a stand alone but keep going,

Hey!
Very sweet and funny chapter. Definitely different than the actual episode. Fairly well written too.
Bye, smile :-)