It's kinda poorly written. Apparently, sickness is cool to you, regardless of the fact that you based this story on real events that happened to you. dont worry, i went through the same stupid phase. You think that people who only talk in song lyrics are cool. whatever floats your boat. but I did like how craig was in this hospital and all, you portrayed it nicely. no offense, because this story probably holds a lot of personal feelings, but your charactors suck.

Thank you for writing something that is so personal. This was a great story, and I'm looking forward to the sequel. I'm glad that you are portraying Craig as continuing to have issues. As someone who's suffered from depression (and been on meds), I know it is not something that you are "cured" from. Again, good work!

Very well- written. A nice fresh new topic you rarely see stories about, I loved this story, the same with all of your work. Can't wait for the sequel!

This is really good! I will be sad when it is over! I will keep on checking my e-mail for author alerts
~Jules

Thanks for putting this story back up! I love it, please update soon!

Good chapter. =D
~*~Kelly~*~

O'm not pretending to be kownledgeable but yes alot of prostitues where abused but some of them became protitues to get money because it was better then home *shrugs* i love this anyway

Good two chapters!
~*~Kelly~*~

OMG! That's really deep, but you're such a good writer. I just wanted to say thanks for being brave enough to tell the world about what you've been through. It makes me realize how good my friends and I have it, because we just got lucky

Wonder what Emma and Manny are gonna think...though didn't they stop talking to each other? Oh well...this is a cool story, and Allegra is an awesome character. Post more when you get the chance!

Awesome twist, can't wait for you to finish, and then the sequel! Very, very good.

Yay, I'm glad this story is back! =D
~*~Kelly~*~

I am so glad this is back! Keep on updating!